题目内容
【题目】叶诗文，1996年3月1日出生于浙江省杭州市，2010年以来在各重大游泳赛事中表现优异，成为中国泳坛首位“大满贯（grand slam）”得主，成为新一代的中国游泳领军人物。“叶诗文是怎样炼成的”？近期某网站就此现象对网民做了一次调查，结果见下表。请根据下面表格的文字内容写一篇120字左右的短文，短文内容须包括表中提供的所有信息。
成功的关键 | 1. 聪明有天赋：爱动脑筋，纠正错误及时； |
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2. 挚爱且自律：认真从不缺席训练，保质保量完成训练任务； | ||
3. 要强不服输：心理素质好，从容面对失败不放弃. | ||
你能向她学点什么？（不少于两点） | ||
Born in Hangzhou, Zhejiang Province on Match 1st, 1996，Ye Shiwen, has been performing amazingly in different important swimming matches, being China’s first grand slam swimming champion. Her great success has aroused national concern. on the Internet.
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【答案】
There are many factors contributing to her extraordinary achievements. To begin with, Ye Shiwen has a gife for swimming and is ready to think over her techniques, making it possible that she can correct her mistakes during the process of practice timely. Additionally, Ye has been interested in swimming since a child, as a result, she takes every practice seriously and complete it with quality and quantity guaranteed , never being absent. Moreover, Ye has such good psychological quality that she can cope with every detail well, especially when faced with failure.
Personally, she has set a good example to us students and we can learn a lot from her. Not only her perseverance and persistence but also her diligence and optimism are all what we can benefit from.
【解析】试题分析：本文为记叙文类书面表达，提供中文信息材料。文章主要是关于人物方面的描述。写作之前要认真审题，要确保写作内容的完整尤其是一开始的信息材料。接着对于表格里的信息要适当展开处理，采用一定的句型句式。最后发表个人观点需要对前面的内容加以总结，整篇文章对学生的语言表达有一定的能力要求。
【题目】下面文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\），并在该句下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
例如：
It was very nice to get your invitation to spend /\ weekend with you. Luckily I was the am
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Dear Sebastian,
Unlike most of the flight I’ve taken on this trip, the journey from Melbourne to Sydney was thankful short. One hour! It’s much more hotter here in Sydney than in Melbourne, it is strange because I travel from south to north instead of north to south. Things really are upside down below the equator(赤道).
The Sydney Festival is fascinated, and I’m having a marvelous time go to all the art and film shows. It’s going on all mouth, and there’s so much to choose. Best of all, it’s not just in one location, but all over the city, because it’s a great way for me to explore Sydney.
Hope you’re having as many fun in Asia!
Zoe
【题目】How do we find happiness every single day? How do we get more out of life to the fullest? There are 3 easy ways to enjoy life in daily life.
One way to find happiness within you is to show your appreciation to others. Appreciation not only gives happiness to others but we also receive happiness in return first for writing a letter of appreciation and second for the response we get. I encourage you to take 3 Post-it notes and write one Post-it of appreciation for your classmate, one for your friend and one for your parents and see the happiness you feel within and the joy you receive in return. It doesn’t cost any money; it’s simple and very rewarding.
Often we are too tough on ourselves by telling us we could have done things better. Have a look at your life and evaluate where you are today and what you have achieved. Often we tend to forget the achievements during the journey of our life and we need to be reminded. Take 5 minutes right now to write down what you have achieved in life and what you are proud of. Go over the list and tell yourself what a wond]erful person you are and what a great job you have done.
Have you ever kept a journal? Sometimes writing things down will give us clarity and awareness. When you write down in a journal, you have the ability to express yourself as you truly would like to be. Writing is part of inner peace, which is a road towards happiness. Take 5 minutes every day to write down your ideas and thoughts in your journal. By doing so, you will find inner peace and a sense of happiness.
The 3 easy steps above take only 15 minutes. Not only will it bring happiness to you but also to others.
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Show your appreciation to others | ● Write an 【2】 to give happiness to others and receive happiness in return. ● Send a Post-it note to your classmate, 【3】 . ● It costs 【4】 , but benefits you a lot. |
【5】. | ● Write down your 【6】 and your proud things. ● Keep the list as a reminder that you are a successful person. |
Keep a journal | ● It will give you 【7】 . ● It will help you find 【8】 and happiness. |
【9】. | If you follow 【10】 , you will find happiness and bring it to others. |
