题目内容
【题目】假设你是红星中学高三(1)班的学生李华,针对校园内一些不文明现象,你班开展了主题活动,请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,为校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文,记述你和同学参与活动的全过程。
注意:1. 词数不少于60;
2. 短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Recently, I noticed something unpleasent in our school.
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【答案】
Dear Chris,
I’m writing to apply to be a web editor, which I saw advertised on our school website. I would like to work for you because I care a lot about current affairs and take great interest in journalism. I think I can do the job well due to my language skills. I’m good at English. Once I got the first prize in the English Writing Competition in our school. In addition, I worked as a reporter for our school newspaper last year, which will surely help me do the job better.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:本篇书面表达是一篇图片作文。图画作文写作的时候注意以下几点:1、仔细审图并且注意有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确有哪些要点。2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;语言表达要符合英语习惯。4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,语言简洁明了,而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如because I care a lot about current affairs and take great interest in journalism.是状语从句。which I saw advertised on our school website.是非限制性定语从句,此外,文章还使用了In addition等关联词使文章内容更具有层次感,也使内容更加连贯。
【题目】叶诗文,1996年3月1日出生于浙江省杭州市,2010年以来在各重大游泳赛事中表现优异,成为中国泳坛首位“大满贯(grand slam)”得主,成为新一代的中国游泳领军人物。“叶诗文是怎样炼成的”?近期某网站就此现象对网民做了一次调查,结果见下表。请根据下面表格的文字内容写一篇120字左右的短文,短文内容须包括表中提供的所有信息。
成功的关键 | 1. 聪明有天赋:爱动脑筋,纠正错误及时; | |
2. 挚爱且自律:认真从不缺席训练,保质保量完成训练任务; | ||
3. 要强不服输:心理素质好,从容面对失败不放弃. | ||
你能向她学点什么?(不少于两点) |
Born in Hangzhou, Zhejiang Province on Match 1st, 1996,Ye Shiwen, has been performing amazingly in different important swimming matches, being China’s first grand slam swimming champion. Her great success has aroused national concern. on the Internet.
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