Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你的加拿大籍笔友Rex最近因上课注意力不能集中而感到苦恼，来信向你求助。请你给他写封回信，表示安慰，并给出建议。要点如下：

1.写信目的；2.你的建议；3.表达祝愿。

注意:1.词数100左右

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯

3.开头语和结束语已为你写好，不计入总词数;

4.参考词汇：distraction 注意力分散

Dear Rex,

I’m really sorry to hear about your present situation.

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Good luck to you!

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Rex,

I’m really sorry to hear about your present situation. But don’t be worried about it too much, for it may happen to us all at this time or another. You can depend on it that there are many ways to help you out.

First, you can turn to your teachers or experienced persons for advice on your problem. I believe they can help you keep focused in class. Besides, lots of distraction is closely linked to lack of good sleep, so you can rearrange your schedule, and make sure you sleep 7 to 8 hours a day, Moreover, try not to push yourself too hard, and spare mare time to relax with something like sports, music and so on.

Good luck to you!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本文属于提纲类作文，要求假定你是李华，你的加拿大籍笔友Rex最近因上课注意力不能集中而感到苦恼，来信向你求助。请你给他写封回信，表示安慰，并给出建议。注意书信的格式和用语。考虑用一般现在时来写。要点：1.写信目的；2.你的建议；3.表达祝愿。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的短语，为文章增色不少，如: focus in专注于，closely linked to同……密切联系。还使用了宾语从句I believe they can help you keep focused in class.等多种句式结构，增加了文章的可读性。