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【题目】假定你是李华,学校将于6月20日举办为期一周的传统文化艺术品展览(如:剪纸papercuts、绘画、手工艺品等)。请给外教Steven写信,邀请他出席展会并带来他的作品。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】DearSteven,
There will be an exhibition on Chinese traditional culture in ourschool, which will start on June 20 and last for a week.
The exhibition is a collection of works including papercuts,drawings, hand-made works and so on. Anyone who is interested in it is welcometo participate. I know you’re good at hand-made works with the features of yournational culture and you show much interested in such activities. This issurely a good chance for you to enjoy yourself. Would you please attend theexhibition with your works? We’d appreciate it if you could be present.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】本文属于提纲类作文,要求假定你是李华,学校将于6月20日举办为期一周的传统文化艺术品展览(如:剪纸papercuts、绘画、手工艺品等)。请给外教Steven写信,邀请他出席展会并带来他的作品。注意写信的格式和用语。考虑用一般将来时来写。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,一定要契合给出的开头,不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面,结构紧凑,是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的短语,为文章增色不少,如: be interested in对……感兴趣,be good at擅长。还使用了定语从句There will be an exhibition on Chinese traditional culture in ourschool, which will start on June 20 and last for a week.和定语从句Anyone who is interested in it is welcome to participate.等多种句式结构,增加了文章的可读性。