Question

3．假如你是遵义市某一中学高二学生李华，与在你市学习汉语的美国朋友Jack约好一起去公园滑冰，因家里有事不能赴约．请给他写封邮件表示歉意，说明不能赴约的原因并另约一个时间．
注意：
1．词数100左右．
2．应适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Jack，
I am terribly sorry to tell you that I am unable to go skating with you on this Saturday morning．（高分句型一）I was told that my grandparents will pay a visit to us that morning and have a big family party．（高分句型二）I do hope the change will not bring you any trouble．
I am wondering if you could make it on Sunday morning．We can start out early so that we'll have enough time to practise the skills and enjoy the view in the park．（高分句型三）If it's convenient for you，let's meet at 8：00 at the NO.6 bus stop．If not，please let me know what time suits you best．I should be free any time after school next week．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息假如你是遵义市某一中学高二学生李华，与在你市学习汉语的美国朋友Jack约好一起去公园滑冰，因家里有事不能赴约．请给他写封邮件表示歉意，说明不能赴约的原因并另约一个时间，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息 2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：be unable to 不能做某事；pay a visit to拜访；so that以便，为了；If not如果不的话；
I am terribly sorry to tell you that I am unable to go skating with you on this Saturday morning．（高分句型一）
I was told that my grandparents will pay a visit to us that morning and have a big family party．（高分句型二）
We can start out early so that we'll have enough time to practise the skills and enjoy the view in the park．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Jack，
       I am terribly sorry to tell you that I am unable to go skating with you on this Saturday morning．（高分句型一）I was told that my grandparents will pay a visit to us that morning and have a big family party．（高分句型二）I do hope the change will not bring you any trouble．
       I am wondering if you could make it on Sunday morning．We can start out early so that we'll have enough time to practise the skills and enjoy the view in the park．（高分句型三）If it's convenient for you，let's meet at 8：00 at the NO.6 bus stop．If not，please let me know what time suits you best．I should be free any time after school next week．
                                                                                                                                                                                                         Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                        Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．