Question

【题目】在我们城市的很多学校门口，每天上学和放学时，正赶上交通高峰期，很多家长用私家车接送学生，结果导致学校门口的交通严重拥堵，甚至发生恶性交通事故。请就此写一篇英语短文。

要求：1.分析家长接送孩子的原因；

2.对此简单发表自己的看法；

3.词数：100词左右。

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Answer 1

【答案】Nowadays,many parents think it’s convenient to take their children to school and pick them up after school by private cars.Unfortunately,they are usually caught up with rush hours,which makes them stuck in traffic congestion, causing serious traffic jams and accidents around the school gate.

There are some reasons behind this phenomenon.First of all,parents are concerned about their children’s safety. They think it is not safe for children to walk or ride to school on their own,especially during rush hours.In addition, some parents are worried that their children may go to an Internet bar or be bullied on their way home after school.

Faced with this problem,I suggest that on one hand,parents teach their children to be independent and responsible for themselves.It is not wise to do everything for children.On the other,government should take effective measures to solve traffic jams around school gate,such as widening roads or building overpass or underpass.What’s more,it’s every citizen’s responsibility to help make a safer society.

【解析】这是一篇话题作文。文章中心已经给出。考生在写这篇文章时，要注意以下几点：1. 通篇以一般现在时为主。2.对现象的原因要准确剖析，并正确地表达出来，条例清晰，重点突出。3.文章最后要发表自己的看法，立场明确，可以写出你的理由或解决措施来丰富文章内容。

【范文亮点】

1.文章采用了“There are some reasons behind this phenomenon此现象背后有如下原因”“Faced with this problem,I suggest that...对于这个问题，我认为... ”“It is not wise to do everything面面俱到是不明智的”等高分句式。

2.文章运用了“private cars私家车”“caught up with赶上”“traffic jams交通拥堵”“Internet bar互联网吧”“on one hand...On the other hand...一方面...另一方面...”等高频词组。

3.运用了“First of all首先”“In addition另外”“What’s more此外”等逻辑连接词，使文章行文流畅，衔接更自然。

引导定语从句.

4.采用了“Unfortunately,they are usually caught up with rush hours,which makes them stuck in traffic congestion, causing serious traffic jams and accidents around the school gate.”这种复合句，既有which引导的非限制性定语从句，又用到现在分词作伴随状语，为文章增光添彩。

5.文章运用了表语从句“some parents are worried that their children may go to an Internet bar or be bullied on their way home after school一些家长担心自己的孩子可能会去互联网吧，或者在放学后被欺负”。