Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Johnson即将到你所在学校学习，想通过你了解学校食堂(canteen)的情况。请你根据提示给他写封电子邮件，向他介绍相关情况。

内容包括：

1. 就餐时间

2. 菜品种类

3. 就餐费用。

注意：1. 100词左右，开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Johnson,

I am glad to hear that you will come to study in our school.

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Looking forward to your coming.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Johnson,

I am glad to hear that you will come to study in our school. Here I will introduce you our canteen so that you can get prepared. The canteen usually runs early in the morning from 6:30 to 7:00. They offer noodles, bread, porridge , eggs and so on for breakfast. Lunch starts at 12:00 and lasts about 40 minutes with various dishes including fresh vegetables and delicious meat like pork fish and beef. Dinner begins at 5:30 p.m. and there are a few dishes provided. The average expense of each meal is about 8 yuan. Of course, it will cost you more if you order special dishes. I believe you can get used to the food here soon.

Looking forward to your coming.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：本文是一篇电子邮件，介绍学校食堂的情况。内容包括：就餐时间；菜品种类；就餐费用。写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用，主次分明，详略得当，语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写、错写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】

本文是一篇电子邮件，属于提纲式作文。内容齐全，语言精练，运用高级句子，文章主要采用一般现在时态的句子。Here I will introduce you our canteen so that you can get prepared.目的状语从句用在句中；Lunch starts at 12:00 and lasts about 40 minutes with various dishes including fresh vegetables and delicious meat like pork fish and beef. Including使用巧妙；it will cost you more if you order special dishes.if引导条件状语从句。