题目内容
【题目】假如你是李华,最近与好友Mike吵架了,事后你非常后悔,想修复与好友的关系。现在写邮件给你在美国的笔友Peter写信请求帮助。邮件的内容包括:
1.吵架的原因。
2.吵架后的感受。
3.请求Peter提出建议。
注意:1. 词数 100 词左右。
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Peter,
How is everything going? The reason why I am writing to you is that I quarreled with my best friend Mike and I need your help urgently.
The quarrel occurred when we were discussing whether we should go out for a big dinner for the celebration of our football team winning the game last weekend. Due to the coming examination, I insisted on studying at the school while she opposed strongly. After the incident, we have not chatted with each other any more, causing me great depression. I really regret what I did and I have been feeling frustrated ever since. I really don’t want to lose this friend. Could you please offer me some effective and practical advice? Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求写一封信。
第1步:根据提示可知,本篇为一封电子邮件;你最近与好友Mike吵架了,事后你非常后悔,想修复与好友的关系,现在写邮件给你在美国的笔友Peter写信请求帮助,内容包括:吵架的原因,吵架后的感受,请求Peter提出建议。本文使用第一人称,时态应为一般过去时。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),如:quarrel with (和……吵架),urgently(急迫地),occur(发生),regret(后悔),effective and practical advice(有效而可行的建议)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【亮点说明】
范文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如定语从句和表语从句The reason why I am writing to you is that I quarreled with my best friend Mike and I need your help urgently.;时间状语从句和宾语从句The quarrel occurred when we were discussing whether we should go out for a big dinner for the celebration of our football team winning the game last weekend.;让步状语从句Due to the coming examination, I insisted on studying at the school while she opposed strongly.非谓语动词的运用After the incident, we have not chatted with each other any more, causing me great depression.全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
