题目内容
【题目】假设你是小明的好朋友李华,小明参加了一个英语演讲比赛,他对比赛非常担心,向你求助,请你根据以下内容给他写一封建议信。
赛前准备 | 做好充分准备:如平时可对着镜子练习 |
用语简练, 使评委印象深刻 | |
比赛时 | 保持微笑 |
忘词时不紧张,继续演讲 |
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1. 说明回信的意图;
2. 向小明提出建议;
3. 预祝小明比赛成功。
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【答案】Dear Xiaoming,
You have told me that you are very nervous about the coming speech contest and I will try to make some suggestions which I hope can help you.
In my opinion, you should get well prepared before the speech contest by practicing before a mirror. Besides, you had better use a brief and concise language in your speech so that you can leave a deep impression on the judges. When you are giving the speech, remember to keep smile and even if you forget your words, don’t be panic and just continue your speech, because no one will notice it.
Wish you success in the speech!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】本篇作文为书信类文章,写作内容是针对别人的求助给出建议。写作内容主要分三部分,首先要说明回信的意图,也就是give some suggestions。文章的主体部分就是说明建议的具体内容。因为命题者给出的写作内容比较多,在阐述的时候同学们要注意层次性,多用过渡词以保证文章结构的清晰。可以用first of all; then; besides; last but not the least等短语展开文章主体部分,也可以按照表格里的“赛前准备”和“比赛时”两个方面再细分层次进行描述。最后不要忘记写信结束部分的套话,虽然套话大多类似,对文章要表达的信息也没有什么帮助,但却是必不可少的。而且命题者也对“预祝小明比赛成功”这一信息进行了要求。所以同学们还是要加上Wish you success in the speech!这一套话。
【范文亮点】:1. that引导宾语从句;which引导定语从句 You have told me that you are very nervous about the coming speech contest and I will try to make some suggestions which I hope can help you 这个长句子用在文章的开头部分,开门见山地表达了回信的意图,很好地完成了第一个写作要求。2.过渡词的使用Besides, you had better use a brief and concise language in your speech so that you can leave a deep impression on the judges. 在文章的主体部分,besides起到了很好的连接作用,同时文章的结构也变的清晰明了。