题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,从互联网(the internet)上得知一个国际中学组织将在新加坡(Singapore)举办夏令营,欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。
内容主要包括: 1. 自我介绍(包括英语能力);
2. 参加意图(介绍中国、了解其他国际);
3. 希望获准。
注意: 1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.邮件开头和结尾已已为你写好。
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Regards,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m Li Hua,a middle school student from China.I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it.I know that you welcome students from different countries and I’d like to take part in it.I’ve been learning English for 10 years,and I speak fluent English.What is more,I’ll be able to tell students from other countries,about China and learn about their countries as well.I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp.
Looking forward to your reply!
Regards,
Li Hua
【解析】这是一封电子邮件。一个国际中学组织将在新加坡(Singapore)举办夏令营,欢迎各国学生参加,要求你写一封电子邮件申请参加。内容要点如下:1. 自我介绍(包括英语能力);2. 参加意图(介绍中国、了解其他国际);3. 希望获准。需要用正确的英语把给出的要点准确表达出来。本文属于提纲式要点作文,是学生比较熟悉的题材,体现了英语学习应该注意实用性、生活性的原则。提纲类书面表达不是简单的逐条翻译,而是将所给的几个要点合理的组成比较通顺的语句,因此要仔细组织语言,合理安排结构。写作时最好开门见山,例如I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it. 尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要富有变化。
写作亮点:本篇条理清楚,要点全面,结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅,也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如:文章运用了定语从句that you have posted on the Internet.和宾语从句that you welcome students from different countries.以及What is more,等词汇。