Question

【题目】最近，家庭生养二胎已成社会热门话题。很多孩子都强烈反对自己的父母生养二胎。某英文报小编想听听你就此现象的看法。假设你是李华，请给报社小编写一封信，简要说明当今孩子反对自家生养二胎的可能原因及你对此事的看法。

注意：

1．词数100左右；

2．信的开头已为你写好。

Dear Editor,

I’m writing with regard to the topic in your newspaper that some children are strongly against their parents’ having another child.

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Editor,

I’m writing with regard to the topic in your newspaper that some children are strongly against their parents’ having another child.

From my perspective, the reason why some children react to it so violently is probably that they, already accustomed to owing the whole love of their parents, are worried that their parents will spend all their time and energy on the little baby while ignoring them. However, what they don’t realize is that having another child is of great significance to a family, because it is children that make a family harmonious. What’s more, with a brother or a sister keeping them company, they won’t feel lonely and will learn to value the sense of sharing and being considerate.

Therefore, I think they should accept another child in their family and their life will be better.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本文是写一篇给定主题的书面表达，写作话题为当今孩子反对自家生养二胎的可能原因。

1.在写作时应注意要符合主题，通篇以一般现在时为主；

2.要点要齐全，并且使用适当的连接词如文中的From my perspective、However、What’s more、Therefore等，使上下文行文流畅；

3.行文思路要有逻辑性，条例清晰。因为所有的考生的大致内容都是一样的，所以难点就是写出让人眼前一亮的作文。学生可以采用简单句与复杂句结合的方法如文中的 the reason why some children react to it so violently is probably that they, already accustomed to owing the whole love of their parents, are worried that their parents will spend all their time and energy on the little baby while ignoring them就是一个采用了非谓语动词和定语从句和简单句结合的句子；

4.同时尽量避免多次使用相同的单词与词组，尽量使用一些高级词汇与词组如文中lonely、be accustomed to、significance、violently 等使内容更加的充实。

【范文亮点】

文章开头以 the reason why引出话题，言简意赅，主旨鲜明。文章用From my perspective，What’s more,However这些连接词，层层递进，条理清晰，讲出了对于作文主题的建议。最后用Therefore总结，首尾呼应，文章结构紧凑。文章还用了be accustomed to,spend on,be worried that等高级短语让文章看起来更有料。