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20．什么样的爸爸才是好爸爸？最近流行的电视真人秀节目"爸爸去哪儿哪？（Where Are We Going，Dad？）"引起了大家对这个问题的广泛关注．
请联系生活实际谈谈你心目中的好爸爸，内容包括：
阐明父爱对孩子成长的重要性；
好爸爸应该具备的特征；（特征至少两点）
你对自己爸爸的感受．
要求：语言规范，语篇连贯，字数120词左右．
What kind of father is a good father？Recently，a popular TV Reality show"Where Are We Going，Dad？"has brought it to the public's attention again．

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息讲述什么样的爸爸才是好爸爸．写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：阐明父爱对孩子成长的重要性；好爸爸应该具备的特征；（特征至少两点）你对自己爸爸的感受．2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：public's attention公众的注意；play an important role 起重要的作用；set a good example for 为…树立好的榜样；is occupied with 忙于；protect…from…保护…免受

解答 What kind of father is a good father？Recently，a popular TV Reality show"Where Are We Going，Dad？"has brought it to the public's attention again．There is no doubt that fathers play an important role during their kids'growing up．（高分句型）In reality，some fathers'absence in their kids'life has caused some family problems．In this TV show，five fathers set a good example for their kids by helping them deal with pressure，understanding their desires，setting achievable goals．（高分句型）Besides，they give their children affection and warmth whenever necessary．
   My father is such a person．He seems strict but in the soul he is kind．During the weekdays，he is occupied with his work，but at weekends，we usually spend time together watching movies or doing some sports．And he shows me every father should be like a mountain to protect their kids from harm and teach them in a wise way．（高分句型）

点评 应该注意适当增加细节以使行文连贯，比如适当选用表示因果、递进、转折关系的连接词，使文章流畅、通顺，并避免因反复使用句式相同的简单句而造成的单调感．（1）认真审题，确定体裁． （2）构思要点．根据题目要求，理解要表达的要点．设计好文章的层次段落，考虑所用时态、人称等，把要点串联起来，构成文章框架．（3）选词造句，避难选易．（4）认真检查，避免错误．仔细阅读全文，查找是否有错，注意时态、单词拼写、字母大小写、标点是否有误，句式是否正确．逻辑是否一致．

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3．可适当增加细节，使文章连贯
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