Question

8．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友（Jack）不久前去美国留学，他给你写信说很不适合那里的生活，请你根据以下提示用英语给他写封回信，鼓励他勇敢面对．
1．了解当地的生活习惯，尊重当地风俗．2．与美国学生多交流．3．多参加户外活动．4．注意与人交往的礼仪．
注意：1．词数100左右．2．开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
3．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯．
Dear Jack，
　　　  I'm really glad to hear from you and know how you are getting along．

Answer 1

分析 这是提纲类作文，根据题目要求可知用第一人称展开叙述，时态应该以一般现在时态为主．内容分成三部分：一 点明写信的原因；二使他摆脱困境的建议，这是文章的主体，包括1．了解当地的生活习惯，尊重当地风俗．2．与美国学生多交流．3．多参加户外活动．4．注意与人交往的礼仪；三 表达祝愿．
高分句型：
1．Secondly，there should be plenty of American students whom（引导定语从句，代指先行词plenty of American students ） you may turn to for help（turn to  sb for help表示"向某人求助"） as well as（ as well as表示：也包括） communicate and go out with．
第二，应该有很多美国学生你可以向他们求助，和他们交流，跟他们一起出去玩．
And finally，I suggest （此处省略了宾语从句的引导词that）you pay attention to the manners while （while连接时间状语从句，表示"在此期间"）you make friends or communicate with the local
最后，我建议你在和当地人交往和交友的时候注意自己的礼仪．

解答 Dear Jack，
   How is everything going in England？I know it is hard for you to get accustomed to such a new environment，but I trust that you can make it bravely and successfully!I have been abroad before so would you like some suggestions from me（点明写信的原因）？
   First of all，we should befamiliar with the local customs and life，and we need respect their customs andtraditions．If you have anything confusing，you may speak up to your British friends．I believe they will help you understand．Secondly，there should be plenty of American students whom you may turn to for help as well as communicate and go out with（高分句型一）．Whynot？Additionally，please try to do more outdoor activities．The more sports you do the healthier and happier you will become．Trust me on that!And finally，I suggest you pay attention to the manners while you make friends or communicate with the local（高分句型二）．Just to do as the Romans do when in Rome（使他摆脱困境的建议）．
Wish youhave a wonderful time in England（表达祝愿）!
Yours，
Lihua

点评 为了使文章有条理性，我们要用一些表达层次的连接词，例如本文中的First of all，Secondly，Additionally，finally，．这些词语的使用使文章条理清楚，是加分的一个亮点．