Question

【题目】为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie，收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。

内容要点如下：

1．表示理解并给予安慰；

2．提出建议并说明理由。

注意：

1．词数120左右；

2．信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；

3．信的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：temper n. 脾气，情绪

Hi Worried,

I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a bad time at the moment.

Yours,

Jamie

Answer 1

【答案】

Hi worried,

I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a had time at the moment.The truth is ereryone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you don’t have to worry so much. The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you’ll regret. Here are three useful tips:

First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel.This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. Second, go outdoors and play team games with your friends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rig of anger. And third, remain optimistic about your future. Such a positive attitude towards lift can be helpful in lifting your spirits.

I hope you’ll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.

【解析】

试题分析：为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie，收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。内容要点如下：1．表示理解并给予安慰；2．提出建议并说明理由。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意：1．词数120左右；2．信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；3．信的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。

【亮点说明】I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a had time at the moment.句中使用宾语从句；The truth is ereryone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you don’t have to worry so much.定语从句和并列句同时出现在句中；The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you’ll regret.目的状语从句和定语从句完美结合；First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel.介词的宾语从句出现在句中；This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself.动名词在句中运用自如；go outdoors and play team games with your friends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rig of anger.使用原因状语从句；I hope you’ll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.宾语从句和比较级完美结合。