题目内容
20.假设你是李华,请你根据以下要点,写一封短信向Miss Morgan请假.内容要点:*时间:请假3天,从下星期一到星期三
*理由:父亲生病,去照顾.
*承诺:返校后,尽快将落下的功课补上,努力赶上其他同学.
注意:1.词数120左右,开头语已为你写好;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称.
(请假:apply/ask for leave 补课:make up)
Dear Miss Morgan,
.
分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文,根据提示信息写一封短信向Miss Morgan请假,写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确几个要点:*时间:请假3天,从下星期一到星期三*理由:父亲生病,去照顾.*承诺:返校后,尽快将落下的功课补上,努力赶上其他同学. 2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时态.4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:apply for申请;on business出差;take care of照顾;As for至于,关于;make up for弥补;as soon as 一…就; catch up with 追赶;
As my father is badly ill now in hospital and my mother has gone abroad on business,I have to go to see and take care of him.(高分句型一)句中as的意思是"因为",引导原因状语从句
As for the missed lessons during my absence,I will do my best to make up for them as soon as I come back to school.(高分句型二)句中 as soon as 意思是"一…就",引导时间状语从句
I will be very thankful if you approve my application.(高分句型三)句中if属于条件状语从句
解答 Dear Miss Morgan,
I'm sorry to apply for three-day leave from next Monday to Wednesday.As my father is badly ill now in hospital and my mother has gone abroad on business,I have to go to see and take care of him.(高分句型一)(时间及原因)
As for the missed lessons during my absence,I will do my best to make up for them as soon as I come back to school.(高分句型二)And I promise to study hard and try to catch up with others.(承诺)
I will be very thankful if you approve my application.(高分句型三)
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
A. | gave up | B. | gave out | C. | gave off | D. | gave in |
A. | which | B. | where | C. | wherever | D. | when |