Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你的英国朋友John发来邮件，询问你们复课的情况。请你回复邮件，内容包括：

1. 班级规模；

2. 高考变化；

3. 复习备考。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear John,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】参考范文（一）

Dear John,

How is everything going? Classes were resumed several weeks ago in my school and I’d love to tell you more details.

In order to keep a certain distance from each other, every class is divided into A and B, each consisting of 30 students. The class size makes it more possible for us to engage in classroom activities, allowing us to enjoy every lesson actively. Guess what? The university entrance exam is scheduled to be held one month later, which leaves us more time to prepare for it. Thus, I can fully equip myself with all the knowledge and skills for the exam.

How’s the situation in your country? I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

参考范文（二）

Dear John,

Having received your letter asking about how we reorganized classes during the pandemic, I’m glad to share with you something detailed.

Basically, with the pandemic still going on, the former classes were subdivided into mini-classes, containing roughly 30 students for each. Furthermore, our government has postponed the college entrance examination, which allows us more time to make preparations and greatly relieves our anxiety. Last but not least, under the guidance of our teachers, we are all devoted to reviewing all the subjects and getting prepared for the coming exams. I believe with all the efforts made, we’ll resist the impact of the pandemic and get a satisfactory result.

This is the case and wish you well.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，告诉朋友现在复课的情况。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和现在完成时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：1. 表明写信意图

2. 复课情况相关

1）班级规模

2）高考变化

3）复习备考

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

resume；detail；size；the university entrance exam；prepare for；look forward to；pandemic；review

第三步：连词成句

1. I’m glad to share with you how we reorganized classes during the pandemic.

2. Every class is divided into A and B, each consisting of half of students.

3. The university entrance exam is scheduled to be held one month later.

4. It leaves us more time to prepare for it.

5. We are all devoted to reviewing all the subjects and getting prepared for the exams.

6. I’m looking forward to your reply.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步：润色修改