短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分.满分10分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧) ,并在其下面写出该加的词.删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉.注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词, 2. 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分，满分10分)

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧) ,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

Dear Li Ming,

With the final exam comes,you must be worrying for your English again. As we all know that,there are three stages in the study of subject — preview,studying in class and review,among which review is the most important thing. Firstly,make a review plan. Secondly,carry on the review plan regularly. Don’t give in. I follow my review plan strict and have made progress in my studies. Of course,there is more than one way to review. So long as you reviewed regularly,I'm sure you can find more ways to improve you English. If you have some question about English,you may ask me. I'11 be glad to helping you.

Best regards,

Li Hua

71. ... final exam comes ... comes—?coming

72. ... worrying for your ... for—?about

73. ... all know that... 去掉 that

74. ... study of subject... subject 前加a

75. Don’t give in. in —?up

76. ... review plan strict... strict—?strictly

77. ... you reviewed regularly ... reviewed —? review

78. ... improve you English, you—?your

79. ... some question about... question —? questions

80. ... glad to helping you. helping—?help

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Li: Sorry Rob,V ve just spent that on a(n) 10.(amaze) holiday. Can you wait until next week?

We often overlook and completely forget how dangerous the game of baseball can be for the players on the field,and even for the fans,who gather very closely as baseballs and bats fly around at the park at terrifying speeds.

Unfortunately,we were hit with a troubling reminder on Friday night at Fenway Park,Boston as one fan reportedly suffered life-threatening injuries after being struck in the face by the (击球端) of a broken bat. The scary incident happened because a player hit the ball hard,causing his bat to break at the handle. The broken barrel flew into the stands to the left of home plate (the place that the player has to stand next to in order to hit the ball,and the last place they have to touch to score a point) where it reportedly struck the fan. According to Boston police,the fan was taken to Beth Israel Deaconess Medical Center,where she’s currently receiving treatment for her injuries.

A security guard who witnessed the accident said the woman,who was sitting with her husband and son at the time,suffered serious injuries. Her son sitting near her was terribly frightened. A number of fans witnessed the accident,including Alex Merlas of Brookline. “Brett Lawrie hit the ball and the bat broke in half near the end of the bat,” Metlas said. “It hit the fan on the top of her forehead and there was a lot of bleeding. I don't think I’ve ever seen that much blood."

That game was delayed temporarily so the fan could be transported to an ambulance waiting at one of the gates inside the ballpark. Fans were left shocked and shaken as the stadium crew cleaned up the scene. Players could be seen discussing it as well,as all who witnessed it were obviously affected. Those who were watching the accident wished the woman fan and her family the very best.

24. The first paragraph of the text is used to .

A. attract readers’ attention to the topic

B. introduce the meaning of the topic

C. make a comment about the topic

D. provide background to the topic

25. What hit the woman fan?

A. The handle. B. The baseball.

C. The whole bat. D. The broken barrel.

26. The underlined part “Brett Lawrie” in Paragraph 3 is the name of.

A. an eye witness B. a security guard

C. a sports reporter D. a baseball player

27. The game stopped for a short time in order to.

A. make sure the players were not affected

B. take the woman to the ambulance

C. calm audiences down

D. look into the accident

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IDENTITY

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DECORATION

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MESSAGES

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Of course,Huber doesn't win every race she runs,but research has shown that the kind of mental imaging she describes can significantly increase athletic performance. It has also shown that visualization can help speakers control their stage fright.

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28. Huber's visualization of her races.

A. is detailed and thorough

B. is used during the event

C. is based on real pictures

D. is created with other runners

29. The fourth paragraph is mainly developed .

A. by space B. by comparison

C. by process D. by importance

30. According to the text,if you run into difficulty when preparing a speech,you should .

A. ignore the negative aspects

B. do the mental imaging later

C. imagine finishing it smoothly

D. create clearer mental pictures

31. What do we learn about mental rehearsal?

A. It usually produces the desired results.

B. It may be a good way to calm you down.

C. It is more important than physical rehearsal.

D. It is a good chance to show your imagination.

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25. When Mike first came to his high school,he.

A. was excited to make new friends

B. was proud of his new pretty school

C. was pretty nervous about his coming exams

D. was worried about finding new companions

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A. Most of us like popular people.

B. Only popular groups make rules.

C. Being popular is important to students.

D. There are always some rules in a group.

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A. praise her B. appear unhappy

C. are proud of her D. are envious of her

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D. She was one of the coolest kids.

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请阅读所给图画,按要求用英语写一篇词数为100左右的短文。内容要求：

1. 描述画面；

2. 概述其含义；

3. 谈谈个人感想。

注意：

1. 开头己给出，不计入总词数；

2. 可适，发挥，使内容充实、行文连贯。

In the picture,

Mind control Imagine looking at something and being able to move it just by using your brain!That is exactly what the new technology called BrainGate can do 一 with the help of a robotic arm,anyway.

BrainGate is. the idea of Professor John Donoghue and his team of researchers at the Brown Institute for Brain Science,USA. BrainGate is attached directly to the brain. First of all,gold wires are put into the part of the brain that controls movement. These are then connected to a small computer chip(芯片) . When the person thinks about different movements,this creates electrical signals,which are picked up by the chip. After this,the signals that are created by the brain are sent back to a computer,which changes the signals into movements. Finally,the computer uses the robotic arm to carry out these movements. BrainGate can already be used to write an e-mail or play computer games,just by brain power.

The technology has already cost millions of dollars to develop and when it is available for use,it will probably cost thousands of dollars per person. There are still many challenges ahead for Donoghue nd his team. They are currently planning a mini wireless version,which will allow people to be connected to the computer at all times. Donoghue also dreams of using this technology to help disabled people who can't move their arms or legs. He plans to connect BrainGate directly to their own paralysed limbs(瘫痪的胳膊或腿) .This will mean that the person can control their own body again,without relying on a robotic arm.

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32. What does the underlined word “These” in Paragraph 2 refer to?

A. Wires. B. Brains.

C. Thoughts. D. Movements.

33. According to the text,what is one of BrainGate's disadvantages?

A. It is too expensive.

B. It needs improvement.

C. It is difficult to control.

D. It produces few movements.

34. How will Donoghue help disabled people?

A. By making BrainGate smaller.

B. By developing a wireless version.

C. By attaching BrainGate to their bad limbs.

D. By replacing their limbs with robotic ones.

35. What does the military think of thought-controlled machines?

A. They could be useful.

B. They could lead to disasters.

C. They would be in mass production.

D. They would face fierce competition.

短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分，满分10分)

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧) ,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

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