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15．假定你是李华，最近在英语学习上遇到了一些问题．你给笔友Allen写了一封信，希望得到他的帮助．内容如下：
1．学习热情减退；
2．作业太多，疲于应付；
3．…
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
参考词汇：减退weaken
Dear Allen，
How are you？These days I am faced with some problems about my English study，which has confused me long．So I am writing this letter for your advice．（高分句型一）
First of all，my wish to study hard and get good grades has been weakened with time going by．（高分句型二）More often，I find English so boring that I fall asleep in class．Besides，it seems to have endless homework，and to finish it I have to copy others'．What's worse，I am becoming weaker and weaker in this subject．It isnecessary for me to find a tutor who can help me with my English．（高分句型三）
That's all．I would appreciate it if you could lend me a hand．
Yours，
Li Hua．

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息假定你是李华，最近在英语学习上遇到了一些问题．你给笔友Allen写了一封信，希望得到他的帮助，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，要点包括：学习热情减退；作业太多，疲于应付；2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：be faced with 面对；First of all首先；What's worse而且；lend me a hand帮我一下
These days I am faced with some problems about my English study，which has confused me long．So I am writing this letter for your advice．（高分句型一）
 First of all，my wish to study hard and get good grades has been weakened with time going by．（高分句型二）
It is necessary for me to find a tutor who can help me with my English．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Allen，
      How are you？These days I am faced with some problems about my English study，which has confused me long．So I am writing this letter for your advice．（高分句型一）
      First of all，my wish to study hard and get good grades has been weakened with time going by．（高分句型二）More often，I find English so boring that I fall asleep in class．Besides，it seems to have endless homework，and to finish it I have to copy others'．What's worse，I am becoming weaker and weaker in this subject．It is necessary for me to find a tutor who can help me with my English．（高分句型三）
     That's all．I would appreciate it if you could lend me a hand．
                                                                                                                         Yours，
                                                                                                                         Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．

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3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
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