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10．请按照要求用英文回复这个帖子：
With the college entrance examination approaching，quite a few students are suffering mental problems，such as worrying about making progress in their studies．It does great harm to their studies and health．What can we do to help them？
内容要点：1．同意并表示担忧；
2．考前心理焦虑的表现；
3．提出合理的建议．
注意：1．可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；
2．开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3．词数100左右．
I can't agree more with what you said．It's a fact that quite a few students are suffering mental problems．（高分句型一）It is really worrying．
These students are so worried about the college entrance examination that they are discouraged and tend to lose their confidence．They always feel stressed and easily get angry and therefore they can't get along well with others．（高分句型二）
As a matter of fact，there're many ways to deal with their mental problems，such as turning to their teachers for help，communicating with their friends or classmates and so on．（高分句型三）Above all，they need to develop a positive attitude towards their studies and life．Only in this way will they keep in normal mental health and study happily．．

Answer 1

分析 本文要求列出心理焦虑的各种现象，使用一般现在时的时态和第三人称．在提出应该采取对策的时候，又属于议论文的格式． 
本文要点：1．列举学生心理焦虑的现象：部分学生担忧考试成绩；一些学生无法入睡；有些失去信心；有些学生与他人无法相处；2．解决的对策：向老师求助；对于别人交流；对待生活有积极的态度； 
在写作的时候要灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当．语言力求准确、简洁．根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料．同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性．考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等． 
【亮点说明】
本文的亮点是连接词的使用，如：as a matter of fact，first of all，Second和last but not least这些连词让文章成为一个整体．另外句中使用了一些高级词汇：get along well with…，develop attitudes towards…等等． 
It's a fact that quite a few students are suffering mental problems．（高分句型一）
They always feel stressed and easily get angry and therefore they can't get along well with others．（高分句型二）
As a matter of fact，there're many ways to deal with their mental problems，such as turning to their teachers for help，communicating with their friends or classmates and so on．（高分句型三）

解答        I can't agree more with what you said． It's a fact that quite a few students are suffering mental problems．（高分句型一）It is really worrying．
      These students are so worried about the college entrance examination that they are discouraged and tend to lose their confidence．They always feel stressed and easily get angry and therefore they can't get along well with others．（高分句型二）
      As a matter of fact，there're many ways to deal with their mental problems，such as turning to their teachers for help，communicating with their friends or classmates and so on．（高分句型三）Above all，they need to develop a positive attitude towards their studies and life．Only in this way will they keep in normal mental health and study happily．

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．