题目内容
5.假定你是李华,你校摄影俱乐部(photography club)将举办以"美丽中国"为主题的中国学生摄影展,展览时间为2017年7月1日至15日,最后将为最佳摄影者颁奖.请给在你校国际部学习的英国交换生Peter写封邮件,告诉他活动情况,请他提前一周提交作品,投稿邮箱:pchsphotoshow@gmschool.com.注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
Dear Peter,
How are you?I have something important to tell you.
Our school photography club is going to hold a High School Student Photography Show.The theme is"Beautiful China".It will start from July 1,2017 and last for two weeks Finally prizes will be presented to the best designers.(高分句型一)Any student whois interested in it is welcome to participate.I know you have toured many famous scenic spots of China and taken a large number of good pictures about beautiful scenery.(高分句型二)This is surely a good chance for more people to enjoy them.If possible,you can send your photos to pchshotoshow@gmschool.com.before the deadline.(高分句型三)
Looking forward to your reply soon.
Yours,
Li Hua.
分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文,根据提示信息假定你是李华,你校摄影俱乐部(photography club)将举办以"美丽中国"为主题的中国学生摄影展,展览时间为2017年7月1日至15日,最后将为最佳摄影者颁奖.请给在你校国际部学习的英国交换生Peter写封邮件,告诉他活动情况,请他提前一周提交作品,投稿邮箱:pchsphotoshow@gmschool.com,写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态.4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:be interested in 对…感兴趣; a large number of 许多,大量;If possible如果可能的话;Look forward to 盼望;
It will start from July 1,2017 and last for two weeks Finally prizes will be presented to the best designers.(高分句型一)
I know you have toured many famous scenic spots of China and taken a large number of good pictures about beautiful scenery.(高分句型二)
If possible,you can send your photos to pchshotoshow@gmschool. com.before the deadline.(高分句型三)
解答 Dear Peter,
How are you?I have something important to tell you.
Our school photography club is going to hold a High School Student Photography Show.The theme is"Beautiful China".It will start from July 1,2017 and last for two weeks Finally prizes will be presented to the best designers.(高分句型一)Any student who is interested in it is welcome to participate.I know you have toured many famous scenic spots of China and taken a large number of good pictures about beautiful scenery.(高分句型二)This is surely a good chance for more people to enjoy them.If possible,you can send your photos to pchshotoshow@gmschool. com.before the deadline.(高分句型三)
Looking forward to your reply soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.