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20．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Mary想了解一下你将参加的2017年山东省英语夏令营（English Summer Camp）的有关信息．请根据下列信息给她写封信，谈谈有关情况和活动的意义，并邀请她参加你们的活动．
活动地址：山东济南
时间：2017年7月底，共7天
参加人员：来自全国各地的英语爱好者；中，美，英，澳四国的英语老师
活动内容：举行英语演讲比赛，交流英语学习经验，了解各国的文化，游览济南的名胜．
注意：1．内容必须包括以上提供的要点，可以适当增加细节，使内容连贯；
2．词数，100词左右．
Dear Mary，
Nice to hear from you again!
As you know，I'm going to take part in a seven-day English Summer Camp to be held in Jinan，Shandong province at the end of July this year．（高分句型一）Many other English lovers from high schools all over the country will go to the camp as well．Some English teachers from China，England，America and Australia will join us．
In the camp，we will have some English speaking competitions，exchange experience in learning English，know more about the culture from different countries，and of course，we will visit some great scenic attractions in Jinan．（高分句型二）
I think this summer camp will greatly improve my spoken English and I would make some new friends there．（高分句型三）I do hope you will come and join us．
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Mary想了解一下你将参加的2017年山东省英语夏令营（English Summer Camp）的有关信息．请根据下列信息给她写封信，谈谈有关情况和活动的意义，并邀请她参加你们的活动，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，要点包括：活动地址：山东济南
时间：2017年7月底，共7天
参加人员：来自全国各地的英语爱好者；中，美，英，澳四国的英语老师
活动内容：举行英语演讲比赛，交流英语学习经验，了解各国的文化，游览济南的名胜．2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：As you know众所周知；take part in参加；as well也；make some new friends 交新的朋友；English speaking competitions英语演讲比赛；go to the camp去野营；
 As you know，I'm going to take part in a seven-day English Summer Camp to be held in Jinan，Shandong province at the end of July this year．（高分句型一）
In the camp，we will have some English speaking competitions，exchange experience in learning English，know more about the culture from different countries，and of course，we will visit some great scenic attractions in Jinan．（高分句型二）
 I think this summer camp will greatly improve my spoken English and I would make some new friends there．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Mary，
        Nice to hear from you again!
        As you know，I'm going to take part in a seven-day English Summer Camp to be held in Jinan，Shandong province at the end of July this year．（高分句型一）Many other English lovers from high schools all over the country will go to the camp as well．Some English teachers from China，England，America and Australia will join us．
       In the camp，we will have some English speaking competitions，exchange experience in learning English，know more about the culture from different countries，and of course，we will visit some great scenic attractions in Jinan．（高分句型二）
       I think this summer camp will greatly improve my spoken English and I would make some new friends there．（高分句型三）I do hope you will come and join us．
       Best wishes!
                                                                                                            Yours，
                                                                                                             Li  Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．