Question

【题目】假如你是李华，你的美国笔友David想了解你高中第一学年的情况。请根据下列所提示的信息给他写一封回信。

1. 感叹时间过得快；

2. 学习上的得与失；

3. 学校生活：交友，课外活动等。

注意：

1. 100字左右；信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总数。

2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear David,

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What about your school life？Would you like to share it with me? I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear David,

How time flies! It is almost one year since I studied in senior high school. I’m glad to share with you my experience in the new school.

I study very hard here and have learned much new knowledge, which makes me very happy. Most excitingly, I’ve made great progress in English. But I am not good at physics and I’ll have to work harder in the next term.

In this school, I have made so many new friends that I never feel lonely. After class, I often discuss difficult problems and even share my happiness and sorrow with them. In my spare time, I often take part in different kinds of after-school activities, especially ball games. Therefore, I’ve grown taller and stronger.

What about your school life? Would you like to share it with me? I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：本文是提纲类作文，要点已给出；写作时可联系自身实际，适当发挥；但注意要把要点写全，使用高级词汇和高级句型提升文章档次。

【亮点说明】本文是一篇书信，内容齐全，布局合理，文中使用高级句子。It is almost one year since I studied in senior high school. Since引导时间状语从句；I study very hard here and have learned much new knowledge, which makes me very happy.非限制性定语从句用在句中；But I am not good at physics and I’ll have to work harder in the next term.此句是并列句；I have made so many new friends that I never feel lonely.结果状语从句运用巧妙；另外，Most excitingly, After class, In my spare time, Therefore,的运用为文章增色添彩。