题目内容
【题目】某天你收到如下一封来自笔友的电子邮件,请根据邮件内容回复一封100字左右的邮件,表示对Tom的欢迎,并询问他来长沙的具体时间、住宿安排、课程时间并说明你需要了解这些的原因。
Dear Li Hua,
Surprise! I enrolled in a camp organized by Chinese Bridge in August and will spend about a week in Changsha. So, we can finally see each other. Learning the Chinese language and visiting some places of interest like Shaoshan Mountain will be part of the camp. I just can’t wait to see you.
Tom.
【答案】
Dear Tom,
I’m so glad to know that you’ll come to Changsha and I hope to be with you as much as I can be because it will be a wonderful chance for you to feel the Chinese culture and for us to have fun together. It’s nice for you to come in August, for after the college entrance exam I’ll be free most of the time, but if you could tell me when you will come I’ll be better able to arrange my time. I wonder if you can stay in my home during the week, for our house is located at the center of the city and we have a spare room anyway. Could you tell me when your Chinese courses will be taught during the camp? If I knew that, I could arrange some small trips around the city.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:考查开放性作文写作,开放性作文给出了一个话题,并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时,首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型,在你的能力范围之内,选择句式时要赋予变化,因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词,把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体,在发表个人观点的时候,可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采,也能增加得高分的可能性。
【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语have fun玩得愉快;be located 位于;look forward to 盼望着;I’m so glad to know that you’ll come to Changsha and I hope to be with you as much as I can be because it will be a wonderful chance for you to feel the Chinese culture and for us to have fun together.这个句子that引导know的宾语从句和because引导原因状语从句;It’s nice for you to come in August,这个句子it做形式主语,真正的主语是后面的不定式;