题目内容
【题目】书面表达
假设你是李华。你班同学决定为小明举办生日聚会。请你写信邀请外教Susan参加,要点包括:1、时间:周五晚8点至9点
2、地点:学生俱乐部
3、内容:生日歌、蛋糕、游戏等
4、要求:备小礼物
注意:1、词数100左右,开头语已为你写好;
2、可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3、答案必须写在答题卡相应的位置上。
【答案】
Hi Susan,
We're throwing a surprise party for Xiaoming's birthday. We'd like to invite you to the party. We want to give him a surprise, so please keep quiet about it. We'll gather at the Students' Club at 8 pm this Friday, after the evening classes. And it's going to last about an hour. We each will prepare a little present. When he comes, we'll light the candles and sing "Happy Birthday" together for him. Then the cake will be cut and we'll sing songs and play games. It'll be nice to see how excited he will be. I'm sure you'll have a good time at the party, too.
【解析】
试题分析:本文是写一封信,关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲,信的主题邀请外教Susan参加小明的生日聚会,考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示,认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系。灵活运用英语知识,采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来,注意主次分明,详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【亮点说明】学生写作要有灵活性,同时要表现出较好的英语语言表达能力。本文脉络清晰,要点齐全。文章使用了很好的短语和句子:We'd like to我们想要,keep quiet about对...保密,gather at集合, light the candles点蜡烛,It'll be nice to这将会很好,have a good time过得愉快。We want to give him a surprise, so please keep quiet about it.是结果状语从句,Then the cake will be cut是被动句,It'll be nice to see how excited he will be. 是It引导的从句。When he comes, we'll light the candles and sing "Happy Birthday" together for him.句子很出彩。