题目内容
【题目】假设你是红星中学高二(1)班的学生李华,请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,为校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文,记述寒假期间你在中国国家博物馆做志愿讲解员的经历。
注意:1.词数不少于60。
2.短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
During this winter vacation, I worked as a volunteer guide in the National Museum of China.
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【答案】
During this winter vacation, I worked as a volunteer guide in the National Museum of China. It was an extremely unforgettable opportunity.
A few days before the vacation, I applied for the job online. Not long after, I was lucky enough to be given the job. Then I attended a 5-day training course as soon as the vacation began. I was taught how to be both an informative and entertaining tour guide. This was very useful, as I had not done this type of work before. After that, every day over the following two weeks, I gave tours around the Silk Road exhibition, which gave an interesting insight into China’s past. I was delighted to be praised for being an outstanding volunteer at the end of the vacation.
【解析】
试题分析:假设你是红星中学高二(1)班的学生李华,请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,为校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文,记述寒假期间你在中国国家博物馆做志愿讲解员的经历。
写作时不要逐句翻译,可适当增加细节以使行文连贯.要把所提示的点写全,语句通顺,同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词,同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。避免全部使用简单句。注意:1.词数不少于60;2.短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数;3.一定要按着四幅图的先后顺序写。
【亮点说明】It was an extremely unforgettable opportunity.句中使用了两个高级形容词;Not long after, I was lucky enough to be given the job.运用了动词不定式的被动形式;Then I attended a 5-day training course as soon as the vacation began.时间状语从句运用巧妙;I was taught how to be both an informative and entertaining tour guide.被动语态和疑问词加动词不定式完美结合;This was very useful, as I had not done this type of work before.句中运用了原因状语从句;This was very useful, as I had not done this type of work before.恰当地运用了非限制性定语从句;I was delighted to be praised for being an outstanding volunteer at the end of the vacation.句中再现被动语态和非谓语动词。