Question

【题目】假定你是李华，想申请参加2017全球青年峰会（Global Youth Summit）。你写信请外教Mr. Smith帮你写一封推荐信，介绍你的英语能力、个性特点等，并于今年7月5日前发到gys2017@GYLeadership.org。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.不得透露考生本人所在学校及个人真实信息。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,

I’m Li Hua from your class. I’m writing to ask whether you could possibly write me a recommendation letter.

I am applying to participate in the 2017 Global Youth Summit, which requires me to provide a recommendation from my English teacher. Could you please comment on my English competence, class performance as well as my personality? You can refer to my statement attached to this letter. If it is convenient to you, would you be kind enough to send it to gys2017@GYLeadership.org by July 5th?

I sincerely hope you can spare some time from your busy schedule to do me the favor. Think you for your kindness.

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文。根据题干可知：你想申请参加2017全球青年峰会（Global Youth Summit），要求你写信请外教Mr. Smith帮你写一封推荐信，介绍你的英语能力、个性特点等，并于今年7月5日前发到gys2017@GYLeadership.org。

同时要注意以下几点：

1.通篇以一般现在时态为主。

2. 要点要齐全。但是不要对要点进行简单的罗列。可以使用适当的连接词，使上下文行文流畅，衔接自然流程。

3. 注意语气。既然是请外教帮自己写推荐信，言辞应当恳切、真诚。

4. 写作思路：首先应准确地表达自己的请求，第二段要交代请求写推荐信的原因及推荐信包含的内容及其他事项，最后表示感谢。

【范文亮点】

1. 本文结构明确，层次分明。文章首先开门见山，提出自己的请求；然后交代请求的原因并向外教说明推荐信的内容；最后表达感谢。

2. 此外，文章还运用了＂I am applying to participate in the 2017 Global Youth Summit, which requires me to provide a recommendation from my English teacher.＂等非限制性定语从句以及“If it is convenient to you, would you be kind enough to send it to gys2017@GYLeadership.org by July 5th?”虚拟语气。