题目内容
1.假定你是李华,你所喜爱的Global Mirror周报创刊五周年之际征集读者意见.请你依据以下内容给主编写封信,内容主要包括:1.说明你是该报的忠实读者
2.赞赏该报优点:1)兼顾国内外新闻 2)介绍名人成功故事
3.提出建议:刊登指导英语学习的文章
注意:1.词数100左右,开头语已为你写好;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
Dear EditorinChief,
Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Global Mirror!
Sincerely yours.
Li Hua
分析 高分句型一:
First,it covers both national and international news,so that I can learn all important things that have happened during the week.首先,它的内容涵盖国内国外的新闻,那样的话我可以知道这一周内发生的重要的事情.
高分句型二:
Second,equally attractive are the success stories of world famous people,which help me understand how a person can work hard to make the world a better place.
其次,同样吸引人的还有各地名人的故事,那些故事可以帮我更好的理解人们是如何努力的让这个世界变得更好.
高分句型一 so that I can learn all important things that have happened during the week.该句是一个由so that引导的结果状语从句
高分句型二 which help me understand how a person can work hard to make the world a better place.该句是一个由which作关系代词,且在从句中充当主语的非限制性定语从句.
解答 Dear Editor in Chief,
Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Global Mirror!
I'm a regular reader of your newspaper.I like it very much mainly for the following two reasons.First,it covers both national and international news,so that I can learn all important things that have happened during the week.(高分句型)Second,equally attractive are the success stories of world famous people,which help me understand how a person can work hard to make the world a better place.(高分句型)(说明原因)
As a young student,I suggest that Global Mirror carry articles to guide us in our English learning,and I hope that it will become even more popular.(给出建议)
点评 该书面表达为提纲类,该类作文规定了考生表述的思路,因此写作时应注意要表达要点明确,用词简洁.