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4．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
     增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
      删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Recently，many people have participated about a heated online debate over whether to send the old to nursing homes．People differ in their opinion．Here list the ideas of those who in favor of it．
Living in nursing homes，which they say，old people can enjoy more benefits than staying at home．
For one aspect，they can have more chances of communicate with each other，as they have common topics and similar hobbies．However，they can do many things together and don't feel alone．Some old people prefer living in a nursing home to live at home，saying"We may quarrel with ourselves children because of the generation gap"．Another aspect，which is highly valued，is that the old people can have regular professional medical care from doctors．

分析 本文作者针对最近在网上热议的话题（是否将老人送到养老院的问题），主要列举了那些赞成将老人送往敬老院的一些人的理由．

解答 Recently，many people have participated abouta heated online debate over whether to
send the old to nursing homes．People differ in their opinion．Here list the ideas of those
who∧in favor of it．
Living in nursing homes，which they say，old people can enjoy more benefits than staying
at home．
For one aspect，they can have more chances of communicate with each other，as they have
common topics and similar hobbies．However，they can do many things together and don't
feel alone．Some old people prefer living in a nursing home toliveat home，saying"We
may quarrel withourselveschildren because of the generation gap"．Another aspect，which
is highly valued，is thatthe old people can have regular professional medical care from doctors．
详解：
1．about改为in  考查固定搭配   participate in=take part in意为：参加，参与；故用in．
2．opinion改为opinions   考查名词的单复数   此处指的是：他们的观点，由于opinion是可数名词，故用opinions．
3．who之后加are    考查句意理解以及系表结构   本句的意思是：这里列出了那些赞成它的一些人的想法；本句是由who（指代先行词those）引导的定语从句，由于该从句中缺少谓语，故应在介词短语in favor of it前加系动词are构成系表结构．
4．which改为as   考查关系代词   此处用来引导非限定性的定语从句，意为：正如…一样；故用as．
5．of改为to或 communicate改为communicating/communication    考查固定搭配   have a chance to do sth=have a chance of doing/sth意为：有机会做某事；故用to或将communicate改为communicating/communication．   
6．However改为Therefore  考查句意理解以及连词   结合上一句的意思：一方面，由于有着共同的话题和相似的爱好，因此他们可以有更多的机会互相交流；可知此处的意思应是：因此，他们可以一起做许多事情，并不会感到孤独；此处表示因果关系而非转折关系，并且根据此处之后的逗号可知，这里应使用Therefore．
7．alone改为lonely  考查形容词词义辨析    alone：单独的；lonely 孤独的，寂寞的；此处指的是：不会感到孤独；故用lonely．
8．live改为living   考查固定搭配    perfer doing A to doing B：与做B相比更喜欢做A；故用living．
9．ourselves改为our   考查形容词性的物主代词  此处用来修饰名词children，指的是我们的孩子，故用形容词性的物主代词our．
10．去掉the  考查句意理解以及零冠词    本句的意思是：另一个值得高度重视的方面是，老年人还可以有医生对其进行定期的专业医疗服务；由于此处表示泛指老年人，故去掉that之后的the．

点评 短文改错是集语法知识与语言技能为一体的综合性试题，主要考查学生对词汇、语法和语篇三要素的把握能力．错误类型一般有：缺词、多词和错词．常见的错误有：1 词法错误，主要包括动词、名词、冠词、形容词、副词、代词和介词等词类误用、同义词混淆使用、固定搭配等方面．解答此类试题时，需要正确分析句子成分，熟练掌握各词类的用法以及掌握一些固定搭配等．2 常见句法错误．通常表现为简单句、复合句以及疑问句、祈使句、感叹句和强调句等错误．解答此类试题时，需要掌握各类句子的句式结构及意义用法．3 应在理解文章大意的前提下，进行作答．

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