题目内容
【题目】假如你是中学生李华,在上个月的英语演讲比赛准备过程中,认识了外教Mr. Smith, 并得到他的帮助。现在你给他写封信表达谢意。要点如下:
1.致谢;
2.获益;
3.其它。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
Dear Mr. Smith,
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Yours ,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr Smith,
I’m LiHua, a student from Yu Cai Middle School, whom you helped in my preparation for the English Speech Contest last month. So I’m writing to express my gratitude.
Your classes are unforgettable, where not only could I learn more knowledge on speech but I had a lot of fun. You were always listening to my speech carefully no matter how many mistakes I made. Above all, you helped me to correct these mistakes with patience. But for your kind help, I couldn’t have got the first prize.
What a great influence you had on me. I’m determined to work hard at my study in order to be a useful person who can make a contribution to our country and society.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】本文为提纲式作文,要求写感谢信。感谢信的结构第一段表明写信目的,第二段感谢的原因,第三段自己的收获。
亮点:
高级词汇:express my gratitude, unforgettable,more。。。 than。。。, patience, be determined to do , make a contribution to
灵活运用从句:
I’m LiHua, a student from Yu Cai Middle School, whom you helped in my preparation for the English Speech Contest last month. (定语从句)
Your classes are unforgettable, where not only could I learn more knowledge on speech but I had a lot of fun.(定语从句)
You were always listening to my speech carefully no matter how many mistakes I made. (让步状语)
高级句式加强语气
But for your kind help, I couldn’t have got the first prize. (虚拟语气)
What a great influence you had on me.(感叹句)