Question

【题目】书面表达

假设你是李华，是校英语俱乐部的成员。英语俱乐部下次交流的话题是My Hero，请你写一篇英语发言稿，介绍你班身残志坚的同学——王跃。内容包括：

1. 他不能正常地走路； 2. 他对待生活和学习的态度； 3. 你敬佩他的原因。

注意：1. 词数120左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear friends,

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That’s all. Thank you.

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear friends,

My name is Li Hua. I would like to share my hero with you, one of my classmates named Wang Yue.

When Wang Yue was born, he suffered from a rare disease, which made him unable to walk normally. As a result, he has to sit in a wheelchair all day. However, Wang Yue stays positive about life. He works hard at his lessons because he has a big dream. His ambition is to become a scientist when he grows up.

Wang Yue is my hero because he never gives up his dream although he has a physical disability. His example inspires us to try our best to make our dream come true.

That’s all. Thank you.

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要仔细审题，包括以下几个方面：（1）层次结构，（2）句子的时态（3）内容要点。尤其是内容要点要把握准确到位，这是提纲作文，要点需要考生拿捏准确以及正确，考生要注意尽可能使句子的表达形式多样化，适当的使用一些高级句式和高级词汇，以提高书面表达的档次和可读性。因为只能使用120个词表达全部的内容。又要包括所有的要点，考生要多使用复杂句，一句话中多包含些信息。

【亮点说明】文章使用了很好的短语和句子：share sth with sb和某人分享某事，suffered from遭受，As a result结果，inspire激励，come true实现，which made him unable to walk normally.是一句定语从句，His ambition is to become a scientist when he grows up.是一句时间状语从句。