题目内容
【题目】假如你是李华,在英国某中学参加了为期一个月的交换生交流活动。请你给该校校长Mr Black 写一封电子邮件,表示感谢。
内容主要包括:
1.感谢帮助(包括提供的活动,赠送的礼物);
2.交流感受(了解了英国文化、提高了英语水平);
3.欢迎来访。
注意:1.词数不少于100 词;可适当增加细节。
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. Black,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Black,
I am writing to express my thanks for your kind help during my visit in England. Many thanks for all the things you have done for us. And thank you for the gift you sent me. It's one of the best gifts I have ever got.
During my stay in your country, you offered us such good opportunities to communicate with you and your students. Therefore, I have learned more about English culture and my English has improved a lot. Besides, I have made several good friends there.
I am looking forward to your early visit to China so that I will show you around our country.Thank you again for your kind help.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达是一篇应用文,要求考生写一封电子邮件给校长Mr. Black,也是一封感谢信。
第一步:应用文表达,开头结尾给出,注意格式规范,整篇文章使用一般的时态,符合书信语境表达。
第二步:根据内容要点,列出感谢帮助及交流感受。要点概括全面,关键短语,句子选用合理,如express my thanks for, communicate with, made several good friends等等。
第三步:连词成文,结构衔接得体,字数适当,句子运用准确。