题目内容
【题目】假设你是李华,与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店,因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1. 表示歉意;
2. 说明原因;
3. 另约时间。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当加入细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Li Hua,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Bob,
I’m sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.
Shall we go on Saturday morning? We can set out early so that we’ll have more time to read and select books. If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I should be available any time after school next week.
Once again, I am really sorry for any inconvenience caused.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本文是提纲类作文,要点已给出。写作时不要逐句翻译,可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全,语句通顺,同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。根据句意要适当使用并列连词,同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。
本文要点完整,布局合理,使用高级句子。句式较为灵活多变。第一段表述了不能赴约的原因及歉意,本段中三句话中都用了宾语从句:I’m sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble,语言简练,结构严谨。
第二段用一个“Shall we go on Saturday morning?”提出的另约时间的建议,本段中运用so that 引导的状语从句(We can set out early so that we’ll have more time to read and select books);和if引导的条件状语从句If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8:30 outside the school gate句中运用;省略句If not, let me know what time suits you best和what引导的宾语从句巧妙结合。