题目内容
【题目】你们学校即将举行英文演讲。你看到高中生面临着很大的升学压力,周围很多同学课间十分钟也在教室学习,但是效率和成绩并不理想。请你以“A Ten-minute Break”为题写一篇演 讲稿,告诉全校同学适当休息很有必要。
注意:1. 词数100左右。
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
A Ten-minute Break
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【答案】Good morning, everyone! I am extremely honored to have a chance to speak here today!
Time seems limited for us high school students, so more students try to study even during the ten-minute break. In my opinion, taking a break between classes is definitely vital. During the ten-minute break, doing nothing tiring is strongly suggested. Making progress needs a thorough and persevering process, and we all know those who can’t find time for recreation are obliged sooner or later to fail.
Hope you can follow my advice! Your listening is much appreciated!
【解析】
这是一篇提纲类写作。
第1步:根据提示可知,你们学校即将举行英文演讲。你看到高中生面临着很大的升学压力,周围很多同学课间十分钟也在教室学习,但是效率和成绩并不理想。请你以“A Ten-minute Break”为题写一篇演 讲稿,告诉全校同学适当休息很有必要。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组):extremely honored (非常荣幸);limited (有限的);in my opinion (在我看来);vital (至关重要的)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。