题目内容
1.假定你是李华,你校学生会在全校招募志愿者,为即将在你校举行的国际友好学校教育论坛服务.请用英语写一封邮件申请参加.主要内容包括:1.写信目的;2.自我介绍;3.希望获准.注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数.
Dear Sir or Madam.
I'm writing this letter to apply to work as a volunteer you have advertised for.In my opinion,not only can volunteer work help me enrich my knowledge and experience,but also it can help the visitors from all over the world to know better our school.
I am good at English.In addition,in the past three years I have taken part in many social activities in which I performed well and gained rich experience.Furthermore,my interest and skill in communication and teamwork contribute to my application for the job.
I would appreciate an interview at your convenience.I'm looking forward to hearing from you in the future.
With all my best regards.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua.
分析 本文是应用文,根据所给要点写一封电子邮件,为即将在你校举行的国际友好学校教育论坛服务.请用英语写一封邮件申请参加.写作要点:1.写信目的;2.自我介绍;3.希望获准.属提纲作文.在写作时人称以第一人称为主.时态以一般现在时为主.
(高分句型一)not only can volunteer work help me enrich my knowledge and experience,but also it can help the visitors from all over the world to know better our school.
该句使用了not only…but also…的句型,而且在前半句使用了not only can volunteer work…倒装句;
(高分句型二)in the past three years I have taken part in many social activities in which I performed well and gained rich experience.
该句使用了定语从句,先行词为activities,in which引导定语从句;
高级词汇:work as 作为;enrich丰富;not only…but also…不仅..而且…
In addition、Furthermore等过渡词衔接;
解答 One possible version:
Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm writing this letter to apply to work as a volunteer you have advertised for.In my opinion,(高分句型一)not only can volunteer work help me enrich my knowledge and experience,but also it can help the visitors from all over the world to know better our school.
(自我介绍) I am good at English.In addition,(高分句型二)in the past three years I have taken part in many social activities in which I performed well and gained rich experience.Furthermore,my interest and skill in communication and teamwork contribute to my application for the job.
I would appreciate an interview at your convenience.I'm looking forward to hearing from you in the future.(表达希望得到批准)
With all my best regards.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua.
点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点.写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次,平时需注意积累短语和重要句型.
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