Question

16．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Chris刚刚转学，感到一切都很陌生．他在邮件中向你询问如何尽快融入新环境．请你根据以下信息回信：
1．多跟同学交流沟通；
2．积极参加学校活动；
3．向老师寻求帮助．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Chris，
I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in at your new school．Such problems are quite normal．Perhaps the following suggestions may be helpful．
First，I think you may need to communicate with your classmates as much as possible．（高分句型一）In this way，you will get to know each other better．Second，it might be a good idea for you to take part in more activities，which usually involve teamwork and interactions with other students and are therefore good for developing friendly relationships．（高分句型二）Lately，faced with some tough problems，you might consider asking our teachers，who can usually offer you some sensible suggestions．（高分句型三）
I sincerely hope my advice will be of some help to you．If there is anything more I can do to help，please let me know．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文属于应用文中的书信，同时也属于提纲类短文．要求以李华的身份给笔友Chris写信，回答他关于如何融入新环境的问题．所以要使用第一人称和一般现在时为主的时态．要点：1．知悉对方转学以后难以融入新环境．2．多跟同学交流沟通；3．积极参加学校活动；4．向老师寻求帮助．考生可以适当添加一些书信转换常见的串联句，如在文章最后可以加上I am looking forward to hearing from you．等句子．建议文章分成三段，第一段叙述知悉对方的转学以后不适应新学校的情况．第二段阐述具体的建议．第三段表示希望自己的建议有效，并期待收到对方的回信．
【名师点睛】
本篇范文是难得一篇优秀的提纲来作文．本文从题材来说属于应用文，要点都给出来了．文章的结构也不存在较大的难题，所以范文在遣词造句方面下足了功夫．最突出的就是文章中的高级句式，如非限制性定语从句…in more activities，which usually involve teamwork…；分词做状语用法Lately，faced with some tough problems，you might consider asking our teachers；同时范文中串联词的使用也是一个亮点，第二段中提出了三个建议，作者使用了first、second连接了这些要点．
First，I think you may need to communicate with your classmates as much as possible．（高分句型一）
In this way，you will get to know each other better．Second，it might be a good idea for you to take part in more activities，which usually involve teamwork and interactions with other students and are therefore good for developing friendly relationships．（高分句型二）
Lately，faced with some tough problems，you might consider asking our teachers，who can usually offer you some sensible suggestions．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Chris，
      I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in at your new school．Such problems are quite normal．Perhaps the following suggestions may be helpful．
      First，I think you may need to communicate with your classmates as much as possible．（高分句型一）In this way，you will get to know each other better．Second，it might be a good idea for you to take part in more activities，which usually involve teamwork and interactions with other students and are therefore good for developing friendly relationships．（高分句型二）Lately，faced with some tough problems，you might consider asking our teachers，who can usually offer you some sensible suggestions．（高分句型三）
     I sincerely hope my advice will be of some help to you．If there is anything more I can do to help，please let me know． 
                                                                                                                                                                                                         Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                        Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．