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9．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文．短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Dear Shirley，
I've learned you want to know about my family and your bedroom in your last letter．My parents had been waiting for the moment for such a long time．They have prepared for everything you may need during your stay in China．My elder brother Li Hua is a freshman who study in Hebei Univeristy．He really wants to be your guide，take you to some pubs to listen to music or watch football match．My grandfather is very kind that he's willing to tell you much about Chinese culture and history．The bedroom you will live in is just opposite to me，and there are a portable computer and a TV set．The double bed may make you feel more comfortably to sleep on．Necessities of life are available．I believe in my family，you can not only have enjoyable and unforgettable experience，but learn a lot about China，that can greatly enrich your life．

分析 短文作者向他的朋友Shirley介绍了他的家庭以及将要住的房间的一些情况．

解答 Dear Shirley，
I've learned you want to know about my family and your bedroom in your last letter．My parents had been waiting for the moment for such a long time．They have prepared for everything you may need during your stay in China．My elder brother Li Hua is a freshman who study in Hebei Univeristy．He really wants to be your guide，take you to some pubs to listen to music or watch football match．My grandfather is very kind that he's willing to tell you much about Chinese culture and history．The bedroom you will live in is just opposite to me，and there are a portable computer and a TV set．The double bed may make you feel more comfortably to sleep on．Necessities of life are available．I believe in my family，you can not only have∧enjoyable and unforgettable experience，but learn a lot about China，that can greatly enrich your life．
1．had-have     考查时态．根据前句的介绍可知，讲述是现在的情况，故使用现在完成时．
2．prepare后的 for删去      考查介词．此处的prepare是及物动物，prepare for是为…做准备．
3．study-studies      考查时态．根据前文所介绍可知，动词需用一般现在时．
4．take-taking        考查非谓语．take和句子的主语he之间是主动关系，故用现在分词．      
5．match-matches  考查名词单复数．football matches是固定表达，意思是足球比赛．
6．very-so        考查连接词．句子里so…that…是固定短语，意思是如此…以至于．
7．me-mine          考查物主代词．句子里表达的是我的床，故使用mine名词性物主代词．
8．comfortably-comfortable  考查形容词．feel此处是系动词，后需接形容词做表语．
9．enjoyable前加an     考查冠词．experience此处是可数名词，表示经历，所以用an修饰．
10．that-which 考查连接词．分析句式可知，which引导一个非限制性定语从句．

点评 短文改错题考查的是语境理解能力和用法基础知识．常考的知识点有：名词（单复数错误），动词（时态，语态，搭配，转换），代词（指代错误），形容词和副词（转换，比较等级），连词（and，but，or）等．偶尔也会考查逻辑错误，如本来用her，却用了his等等．解题是要注意：以句子为单位，以动词为中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的错误；找错误要以动词为主，动词或与动词有关的错误占了改错的题的重要一部分．

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