题目内容
10.假如你叫李华,你的美国笔友Mary听说中国发生了很大变化,对此非常感兴趣.她发了一份e-mail给你,想请你介绍中国城市及农村的新面貌.请你给她回电子邮件,内容包括:1.不少农民进城务工,甚至买房;
2.农村几乎每家都盖起了新房;
3.欢迎Mary有空来中国做客.
要求:1.词数:100词左右;
2.信的开头及结尾已写好,不计入词数.
Dear Mary,
I'm glad to have received your letter.
I'm glad to have received your letter.Now let me tell you the changes about China.
As the economy develops fast,great changes have taken place in China.First of all,many famers rush into the city to seek the fortune,even buying new houses in thebig city.In addition,more and more new houses in the countryside are being cnstructed.So do come to China to feel the great changes at you convenience.
I am looking forward to seeing you in China.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua.
分析 本文是提纲类,要求请你给你的美国笔友Mary回电子邮件,介绍中国城市及农村的新面貌.内容包括:1.不少农民进城务工,甚至买房;2.农村几乎每家都盖起了新房;3.欢迎Mary有空来中国做客.时态需用一般现在时.
(高分句型一)As the economy develops fast,great changes have taken place in China.
该句使用了as引导状语从句,意思是随着中国经济的快速发展,主句使用了现在完型时have taken place.
(高分句型二)more and more new houses in the countryside are being cnstructed.
该句使用了被动语态结构,即are being cnstructed,指越来越多的新房子正在被建立.
First of all,In addition,So 等过渡词衔接上下文,自然流畅.
解答 Dear Mary,
I'm glad to have received your letter.Now let me tell you the changes about China.
(高分句型一)As the economy develops fast,great changes have taken place in China.First of all,many famers rush into the city to seek the fortune,even buying new houses in the big city.In addition,(高分句型二)more and more new houses in the countryside are being cnstructed.So do come to China to feel the great changes at you convenience.
I am looking forward to seeing you in China.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua.
点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点.写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次,平时需注意积累短语和重要句型.
A. | have been washed away | B. | is washed away | ||
C. | was washed away | D. | have washed away |