Question

【题目】现在越来越多的女士加入了减肥大军，最近你们班就此事展开了讨论。60%的同学赞成，40%的反对。请你写一篇英语短文，短文应包括下表中的内容：

赞成	反对
1.使人身材苗条、漂亮	1.浪费时间、精力和钱
2.正确减肥有利于身体健康	2.吃减肥药会损坏身体健康
3.坚持减肥有助于锻炼人的意志	3.过分看重减肥的人往往缺乏自信
你对它的看法(内容由考生自己拟定)

注意：1.对所给要点，不要简单翻译，要有适当发挥；

2．词数100词左右。

参考词汇：毅力perseverance；看重take sth. seriously

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Answer 1

【答案】As we know, more and more ladies are beginning to lose weight in different ways now. Recently, our class have had a heated discussion about it.

About 60% students are for it. They think one can stay slim and look beautiful by losing weight. If one does this in a proper way, it can stop one from getting fat and can keep one healthy. Besides, taking everyday exercise and going on a diet can help to train a person’s perseverance. However, the others have different ideas. They hold the view that it is a waste of time, energy and money. Some often try to lose weight by taking weight loss pills. As a result, their health gets damaged badly. What’s worse，whoever takes weight loss seriously often lacks confidence.

In my opinion, if one is too fat and often falls ill, he or she should try to lose weight with the help of a doctor.

【解析】

本文书面表达属于应用文，要求写一主题班会的英语短文。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇是一篇主题班会的英语短文：现在越来越多的女士加入了减肥大军，最近你们班就此事展开了讨论。60%的同学赞成，40%的反对。请你写一篇英语短文，短文应包括下表中的内容：赞成：使人身材苗条、漂亮；正确减肥有利于身体健康；坚持减肥有助于锻炼人的意志。反对：浪费时间、精力和钱；吃减肥药会损坏身体健康；过分看重减肥的人往往缺乏自信。你对它的看法(内容由考生自己拟定)

第2步：根据写作要求确定关键词，如：毅力perseverance；看重take sth. seriously；look beautiful by losing weight（通过减肥看起来美丽）；train a person’s perseverance（训练一个人的品质）；a waste of time, energy and money（浪费时间、精力和金钱）；lacks confidence（缺乏自信）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。