Question

13．为迎接"建校60周年校庆"，光华外国语学校举办了了英语征文活动．假如你是该校一名高三毕业生，请你以For My School's 60th Birthday 为题，用英语写一篇120-150词的短文，内容包括：
1．感谢母校，表示祝贺．
2．回忆高中生活．
3．提出希望和祝福．
For My School's 60th Birthday．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文，让我们就迎接"建校60周年校庆"，写一篇作文，这需要我们发挥英语思维，将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来．写作需要用第一人称，时态主要是一般过去时，内容要点包括：感谢母校，表示祝贺．回忆高中生活．提出希望和祝福．我们此篇作文分为三部分，第一部分为感谢母校，表示祝贺．第二部分为回忆高中生活．第三部分为提出希望和祝福．
重点短语与句型：
dig into study埋头学习
lay off停止做某种不快的事
take a short nap打盹
高分句型一：I took a short nap at noon，after which another period of hard，hard study began．此句用了介词加关系代词引导的定语从句
高分句型二：Though there was no one single minute that our nerves were relaxed in the past three years，our teacher took care of us．All the students studied very hard and we all live the life to the fullest．此句为though引导的状语从句．

解答 In this unusual day，we are very happy to  gather together to celebrate our School's 60th Birthday．Thank for my dear school．（感谢母校，表示祝贺．）
We have spent three years in the school．I am very sad that I have to say good bye to you，my dear school．EverydayI got up at no later than 6：00，and then I  dug into study with fever pitch．from time to time，I  fear once I lay off，I  would lag behind．we slept at mid-night after all day's study．Every day I  try to push 110% of myself into the grueling study．I  took a short nap at noon，after which  another period of hard，hard study began．（高分句型一） Though there was no one single minute that our nerves were relaxed in  the past three years，our teacher  took care of us．（高分句型二）All the students studied very hard and we  all live the life to the fullest．（回忆高中生活）
we will go to diferent senior shools next term．I hope everyone will have a bright future!I'll miss old classmates，teachers and my dear school．（提出希望和祝福）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧