题目内容
【题目】请你根据下面的提示,用英语对钟南山作简单介绍,写一篇英语作文。
出生 | 1936 年 10 月出生于南京,21 世纪最出名的医学家之一 |
教育背景 | 1953 年,就读于广东实验中学;1960 年,毕业于北京医学院 |
主要成就 | 2003 年和 2020 年,以钟南山为代表的医护工作者经长期努力,抗击 了非典和新冠肺炎;2004 年,钟南山被评为“感动中国 2003 年度”十大人物之一。 |
评价 | 他在医学领域工作 60 多年,取得了很多成就, 是一位受国人尊敬 的好医生。 |
注意:1. 词数 100 左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
(新冠肺炎 NCP, 非典 SARS)
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【答案】Dr. Zhong Nanshan was born in October 1936 in Nanjing, Jiangsu Province. He is one of the famous medical scientists in the 21st century.
He studied at Guangdong experimental high school in 1953 and graduated from Beijing Medical College in 1960. In 2003 and 2020,Zhong Nanshan not only led but also took an active part in the battle against SARS and NCP. Through their hard work for several months, Zhong Nanshan and his workmates achieved remarkable result. Zhong Nanshan was awarded one of the top ten people moving China in 2004.
He has been working in the medical field for over 60 years. He is a good doctor in the countrymen' eyes and respected by all the people in China.
【解析】
这是一篇记叙文。本篇要求考生写一篇文章介绍钟南山。
体裁:记叙文
时态:根据提示,时态应以一般现在时和一般过去时为主。
结构:分总
要求:
1. 出生
2. 教育背景
3. 主要成就
4. 评价
第二步:列提纲(重点词组)
be born in/ well-known/ graduate from/ be on behalf of/ effort/ play a part in/ achieve/ top ten/ respect/ against
第三步:连词成句
1. Born in October 1936 in Nanjing, Jiangsu Province, Zhong Nanshan is one of the famous medical scientists in the 21st century.
2. He studied at Guangdong experimental high school in 1953 and graduated from Beijing Medical College in 1960.
3. In 2003 and 2020,Zhong Nanshan not only led but also took an active part in the battle against SARS and NCP.
4. Through their hard work for several months, Zhong Nanshan and his workmates achieved remarkable result.
5. Zhong Nanshan was awarded one of the top ten people moving China in 2004.
6. He has been working in the medical field for over 60 years.
7. He is a good doctor in the countrymen' eyes and respected by all the people in China.
第四步:连句成篇(加入衔接词或从句)
表示并列的连词:and/but/or/so…
状语从句连词:because/ if/ though/ although…
定语从句连词:which/ that/ when/ where…
第五步:修改润色(加入高级词汇或短语)