题目内容
【题目】书面表达(满分25分)
假如你是某中学的学生Tom。前不久,你参加了全国英语演讲比赛并获得一等奖。请用英语给校刊写一篇文章,谈谈你的体会。内容主要包括:
1.付出才有回报;
2.收获自信和友谊;
3.感激之情。
注意 1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节以使行文连贯;
3.开头语已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Looking back to the National English Speaking Competition I took part in several days ago,I have a lot to share with you.
【答案】
Looking back to the National English Speaking Competition I took part in several days ago, I have a lot to share with you.
Firstly, I feel really delighted that I have won the first prize in the competition, which makes me understand the true meaning of the proverb “no pains, no gains”. Besides ,I have established the friendship with students from all over our country, from whom I have learned a lot. More importantly, taking this competition has enabled me to overcome my fear of speaking in public, thus developing my self-confidence. Additionally, I owe many thanks to my teachers and judges, without whose help, I couldn’t have done such an excellent job.
To sum up, I will always treasure this meaningful and memorable experience.
【解析】
试题分析:分析要求可知,假如你是某中学的学生Tom。前不久,你参加了全国英语演讲比赛并获得一等奖。请用英语给校刊写一篇文章,谈谈你的体会。内容主要包括:1.付出才有回报;2.收获自信和友谊;3.感激之情。短文应该用一般现在时,第一人称。要求写约100个词,不要太多或太少。尽量多使用较高级的词汇和短语以及固定句式,注意句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。
【亮点说明】 文中用了一些高级的短语和句式。如: which引导的定语从句、taking 非谓语结构、Additionally, To sum up等都很不错。