[题目]书面表达 (满分35分)请你根据以下提示.并结合事例.用英语写一篇短文.Life isn’t about waiting for the storm to pass．It is about learning to dance in the rain．注意:①无须写标题,②除诗歌外.文体不限,③不能透露个人信息和学校名称,④字数120左右. 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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【题目】书面表达（满分35分）

请你根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。

Life isn’t about waiting for the storm to pass．It is about learning to dance in the rain．

注意：①无须写标题；

②除诗歌外，文体不限；

③不能透露个人信息和学校名称；

④字数120左右。

【答案】

In our daily life, we are often confronted with difficulties, even great troubles．Some people do nothing but wait, while others face them bravely and conquer them．Personally, I think we should learn to face difficulties positively and make every effort to overcome them．

My memory drew me back to four years ago when I was a junior middle school student．At that time, I had great trouble studying English．First of all, I felt it hard to memorize English words．Besides, I didn’t dare to say anything in class when the teacher asked questions though I knew some answers．What annoyed me most was that I failed exams constantly．I was about to give up when my English teacher found problem．He encouraged me and gave me some good advice．Inspired by him, I was determined to defeat it．Following his advice, I made progress gradually．

From my experience, I can draw aconclusion that difficulties are weak if you are brave enough．So keep up and try to defeat them whenever you have any．Never wait for the storm to pass; instead, learn to dance in the rain．

【解析】

试题分析：考查开放性作文写作,开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，如besides, further, last but not least等。在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。

【亮点说明】文章使用了很好的短语和句子：take action采取行动，encourage …to do… 鼓励某人做什么How I wished I could swim like them! 这句话用了虚拟语气， It frightened me just to think of being alone in the water. 这句话用了it做形式主语， Nobody is born knowing how to swim.” 这句话用了伴随状语， there was nothing to be afraid of. 这句话用了there be句型。This experience has also taught me that as long as I never give up and keep trying, I can succeed.这句话用了宾语从句和条件状语从句。

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