Question

【题目】假定你是高三学生李华，听完国外Clemson大学的来校宣讲后，很感兴趣。请写一封电邮给该校招生负责人，进一步咨询相关细节：

1. 所感兴趣专业的课程设置； 2. 学费和奖学金； 3.学生活动。

注意：可以增添适当细节，使行文完整。

字数：120左右。

参考词汇 宣讲会：recruiting presentation

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir,

My name is Li Hua, a student from XinShiji Senior High School. After attending your recruiting presentation, I’m very interested in Clemson University, so I am writing to ask for some information.

I am very interested in Environmental Science; the subject in your university is especially famous. You know the environmental protection is becoming more and more popular all around the world. I really want to be something in this field. So I wonder how I can be a student in your university. Do I have to take some language tests? How much will I have to pay for my education in your university? How can I apply for the scholarship? What kind of student activities do you usually organize in your university?

Your timely reply would be much appreciated.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【解析】

这是一篇应用文写作。

第1步：根据提示可知, 本篇为一封电子邮件；假定你是高三学生李华，听完国外Clemson大学的来校宣讲后，很感兴趣。请写一封电邮给该校招生负责人，进一步咨询相关细节：1. 所感兴趣专业的课程设置 ；2. 学费和奖学金 ；3.学生活动。

第2步：根据写作要求, 确定关键词（组）, 如：recruiting presentation（宣讲会）；ask for（询问）；all around the world（全世界）；pay for（支付）；apply for（申请）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句, 注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用第一人称和一般现在时。

第4步：连句成文, 注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡, 书写一定要规范清晰, 保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。