Question

【题目】假设你是李华。你所就读的新华中学是一所乡村中学。半年前美国某慈善组织曾为新华中学捐款五万美元，请给对方写封邮件，内容包括：

1. 表达谢意；2. 说明捐款的用途；3. 期待进一步交流。

注意：

1. 词数100字左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is Li Hua, a student from Xinhua Middle School. Half a year ago, your charity organization donated 50000 US dollars to our school. Now on behalf of our school, I would like to thank you.

After receiving the money, our school made detailed plans, to make full use of the money. Firstly, we used some money to repair the school buildings. Secondly we added water purification and drinking system, which ensured that children can drink healthy water. Thirdly, we bought computers for classrooms, which greatly improved the teaching environment. Besides，we bought a lot of books for the children.

I hope you will have a chance to visit our school and look forward to further communication.

Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封感谢信。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封感谢信；假设你是李华。你所就读的新华中学是一所乡村中学。半年前美国某慈善组织曾为新华中学捐款五万美元，请给对方写封邮件，内容包括：1. 表达谢意；2. 说明捐款的用途；3. 期待进一步交流。人称使用第一人称。时态应为一般过去时。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：charity organization（慈善组织），donate（捐款），make full use of the money（充分利用这些钱），look forward to further communication（期待进一步交流）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。