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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

It is more than two months after our English club was set up by several classmates and me. So far we organized a lot of activities on English learning, such as watching English films, reading classic novels and hold a Christmas party. Every member took a active part in the activities. Many members said the activities benefited us a lot. Not only did they improved their English, but also they brought them a lot of funs. Personally, I think it is real a good idea to set up the club. It is hoped what our club will grow stronger. And we hope more classmates will join in the club.

【答案】after→ since

organized前加have

hold→holding

a→an

us→them

improved→improve

funs→fun

real→ really

what→that

删掉 Join inin

【解析】

本句为记叙文。文章叙述了作者的学校里的英语俱乐部组织了很多关于英语学习的活动, 这些活动不仅提高了他们的英语水平,也给他们带来了乐趣。作者希望俱乐部会变得更强大,有更多的同学加入这个俱乐部。

1.考查固定句式及连词。句意:我们英语俱乐部成立了两个多月。“It was +一段时间 since....”意为“自从……以来.......已有多久了”。根据语境可知,此处是指英语俱乐部自从成立以来两个月了。故把after改为 since

2.考查时态。句意:到目前为止,我们已组织了很多关于英语学习的活动,如看英语电影、读经典小说和举办圣诞晚会。句中的“so far”意为 “到目前为止”, 一般用于现在完成时,故在organized前加have

3.考查固定用法。句意:到目前为止,我们已组织了很多关于英语学习的活动,如看英语电影、读经典小说和举办圣诞晚会。“such as..”中的as是一个介词,其后的动词要用动词的ing形式,句中的watching English films, reading classic novelsand后面的hold也要用动词ing形式, 故把hold改为holding

4.考查不定冠词。句意:每个成员都积极参加了活动。“take an active in...”意为“积极参加”,因为active 是以元音开头的,要用an。故把a改为an

5.考查代词的一致性。句意:许多会员说这些活动使他们受益匪浅。本句的主语是they,根据语境可知,此处是指会员说使他们受益而不是我们,故把us改为them

6.考查倒装句。句意:他们不仅提高了英语水平,而且给他们带来了很多乐趣。句子Not only did they improved their English, but also they brought them a lot of funs是把not only置于句首的部分倒装,本句是一般过去时,倒装时要把助动词did提到主语they的前面,所以improve不能再用过去时,因为时态已用did体现了。故把improved改为improve

7.考查不可数名词。句意:他们不仅提高了英语水平,而且给他们带来了很多乐趣。句中的fun是个不可数名词,没有复数形式,故把funs改为fun

8.考查副词做状语。句意:就我个人而言,我认为成立俱乐部确实是个好主意。句中的real在句中作状语,修饰整个句子,所以要用副词形式,故把real改为 really

9.考查主语从句。句意:希望我们的俱乐部会变得更强大。分析句子可知,it是形式语,真正的主语是后面的从句。分析可知,从句中不缺少成分,所以要用that引导,如果句中缺少主语、宾语或表语时可用what。故把本句中的what改为that

10.考查词的用法。句意:我们希望有更多的同学加入这个俱乐部。“join in...”为固定搭配,意为“参加某种活动”,而“join”意为“加入(并成为其中的一员)”。本句是希望更多的学生加入,而不是参加活动,故要删掉 Join inin

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