题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,你校绘画俱乐部将举办国际中学生绘画展。请给你的美国朋友John写封信。请他提供作品。信的内容包括:
1.主题:最美劳动者;
2.作品要求及画展时间;
3. 交作品地址:教学楼一楼305教室。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 信的开头和结尾不计入总词数。
Dear John,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear John,
I am Li Hua. Knowing that you have great creativity and talent for painting, I sincerely invite you to provide your works for our school painting club.
Our school painting club is going to hold an International High School Student Painting Exhibition, whose theme is “the most glorious laborers”. It will start from May 1st and last for two weeks. Whoever is interested is welcome to participate.Such paintings as depict scenes of labor and demonstrate the diligence of workers is encouraged. If you want to join , please bring your works to Room 305, No.1 Teaching Building.
The themed activity shall guarantee you a precious opportunity to exchange ideas with other painters. Looking forward to hearing from you and your excellent paintings.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求写一封邀请信。
第一步:
审题:邀请信 邀请你的美国朋友John为国际中学生绘画展提供作品
人称:第三人称
时态:一般现在时
结构:总分法,分三部分,第一部分提出邀请,第二部分说明绘画展的具体内容,
第三部分希望John能提供作品。
要点:
1. 提出邀请:邀请John为国际中学生绘画展提供作品
2.绘画展的具体内容
①作品主题:最美劳动者
②画展时间:5月1 日开始,为期两周
③作品要求:描绘劳动场面、展示劳动人民的勤劳
④交作品地址:教学楼一楼305教室
3.希望John能提供作品
第二步:列提纲(重点词汇、短语)
have great creativity and talent for;invite sb. to do…;provide…for;an International High School Student Painting Exhibition;theme;last for; participate;depict;demonstrate; guarantee sb. sth.;a precious opportunity;exchange ideas with;excellent paintings
第三步:连词成句
(1) You have great creativity and talent for painting.
(2) I invite you to provide your works for our school painting club.
(3) Our school painting club is going to hold an International High School Student Painting Exhibition.
(4)The theme of the exhibition is “the most glorious laborers”.
(5) It will start from May 1st and last for two weeks.
(6)Anyone who is interested is welcome to participate.
(7) The paintings depict scenes of labor and demonstrate the diligence of workers.
(8) Such paintings are encouraged.
(9)If you want to join , please bring your works to Room 305, No.1 Teaching Building.
(10)The themed activity shall guarantee you a precious opportunity.
(11) You will exchange ideas with other painters.
(12)Looking forward to hearing from you and your excellent paintings.
根据提示和关键词进行遣词造句,适当地运用句型,注意时态和主谓一致问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词、亮点词汇)
用定语从句连接下面两个句子
(3) Our school painting club is going to hold an International High School Student Painting Exhibition.
(4)The theme of the exhibition is “the most glorious laborers”.
→Our school painting club is going to hold an International High School Student Painting Exhibition, whose theme is “the most glorious laborers”.
用whoever引导的主语从句转换下面的句子
(6)Anyone who is interested is welcome to participate.
→Whoever is interested is welcome to participate.
用such…as引导的定语从句连接下面两个句子
(7) The paintings depict scenes of labor and demonstrate the diligence of workers.
(8) Such paintings are encouraged.
→Such paintings as depict scenes of labor and demonstrate the diligence of workers are
encouraged.
适当地运用高级词汇、复杂句式提升文章的档次,增加文章的可读性。