题目内容
12．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Three days before，my aunt went to attend a meeting．After the meeting，she went to a restaurant for a lunch．Therefore，when it was time to pay the bill，she couldn't find her purse．She thought it must have stolen．Just then，a man in his early twenty came up and paid for her．My aunt was very gratefully．They talked about each other for a while and my aunt finally realize who he was．My aunt had collected some money to helping a boy before．That young man was the boy．My aunt didn't recognize her，but the kindness had never been forgotten．
分析 本文主要讲述作者的姑姑参加一个会议后去餐馆吃饭，但找不到钱包，这时，一个二十多岁的年轻人给她付了帐．他们谈了一会儿，作者的姑姑才认出他是谁，他正是姑姑以前帮助的那个小男孩．
解答 Three days before，my aunt went to attend a meeting．After the meeting，she went to a restaurant for a lunch．Therefore，when it was time to pay the bill，she couldn't find her purse．She thought it must have∧stolen．Just then，a man in his early twenty came up and paid for her．My aunt was very gratefully．They talked about each other for a while and my aunt finally realize who he was．My aunt had collected some money to helping a boy before．That young man was the boy．My aunt didn't recognize her，but the kindness had never been forgotten．
详解：
1．before改为ago 考查副词．ago表示"从现在起的若干时间以前"，意思是"距今…以前"，需和过去时或过去进行时连用．before泛指"从过去起的若干时间以前"，意思是"距过去某时…以前""与其…（毋宁）"，常和完成时连用，尤其在间接引语中．
2．去掉a 考查冠词．三餐饭前不用冠词．
3．Therefore改为However 考查副词．however表示转折，尤其用于谈及一个既成事实时，表示转折，其意为"可是""仍然"等．可放在句首、句中或句末，通常用逗号与句子其他成分隔开．
4．加been 考查动词语态．根据句意：她认为它肯定被偷了．要用肯定推测的被动形式．
5．twenty改为twenties 考查固定搭配．in one's twenties意为"在某人20几岁时"，是固定搭配．
6．gratefully改为grateful 考查形容词．be动词后接形容词作表语．
7．about改为with或to 考查介词．talk about意为"讨论； 谈论"，talk with/to意为"与…交谈"，此处应是：与…交谈．
8．realize改为realized 考查动词时态．全文讲述的是过去的事情，要用一般过去时态．
9．helping改为help 考查动词不定式．此处to是不定式符号，后接动词原形，不定式作目的状语．
10．her改为him 考查代词．him指代前文提到的a boy．
点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．
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