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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

A moon cake is a Chinese bakery product traditional eaten during the Mid-Autumn Festival, when is one of the four most important Chinese festivals. The festival is for lunar appreciation and moon watching. Meanwhile moon cakes are regarded as the necessary part. Moon cakes are not only offered between friends or on family gatherings, and today it is customary for people present moon cakes to others as presents. This helps to fuel a demand in high-end moon cakes. Due to China’s influence, moon cakes and the Mid-Autumn Festival is also enjoyed and celebrated in some Asian country beyond China. Most cakes have also been appeared in the Western world as a form of taste food.

【答案】1.traditional改为traditionally 2.when改为 which 3.the改为 a

4.and改为 but 5.people后加 to 6.in改为for 7. is改为are

8. country改为countries 9.删除been 10.tast改为tasty

【解析】

本文是一篇说明文,介绍了中国传统美食月饼以及传统节日中秋节,随着中国在国际上的影响越来越大,月饼盒中秋节在很多国家也开始流行了。

第一处:考查副词。句意:月饼是一种传统的在中秋节食用的中国烘烤食品。副词通常在句中充当状语修饰形容词、副词、动词或整个句子。形容词通常充当定语后表语修饰名词。句中用副词作状语修饰谓语部分。所以要把traditional改为traditionally。

第二处:考查定语从句。本题定语从句的先行词是the Mid-Autumn Festival关系代词which指代先行词,引导定语从句并在句中做主语,而where是关系副词,通常在句中充当状语。所以要把where改为which。

第三处:考查冠词。句意:与此同时月饼被当成其中必要的一部分。句中不定冠词a修饰part表示泛指。所以要把the改为a。

第四处:考查连词。句意:月饼不仅仅用于朋友或加入聚会,而且现在送月饼给别人做礼物的还是一个风俗。句中考查了not only….but also…的固定结构。所以要把and改为but。

第五处:考查不定式复合结构。不定式复合结构“for sb to do sth某人做某事表示不定式动作的执行者。句意:月饼不仅仅用于朋友或加入聚会,而且现在送月饼给别人做礼物的还是一个风俗。所以要在people后加to。

第六处:考查介词。名词demand意为要求,通常和介词for连用构成短语“...demand for…的需要,本句指对高质量月饼的需求。所以要把in改为for。

第七处:考查主谓一致。句意:意为中国的影响,月饼盒中秋节在中国以外的亚洲国家也被庆祝。本句主语是复数名词moon cakes and the Mid-Autumn Festival,谓语动词也要使用复数形式与之对应,所以要把is改为are。

第八处:考查名词单复数。句意:句意:意为中国的影响,月饼盒中秋节在中国以外的亚洲国家也被庆祝。名词country是可数名词,前面有some修饰,应该用复数形式。所以要把country改为countries。

第九处:考查语态。句意:作为一种可口的食物月饼也出现在西方世界了。动词appear意为出现,该词没有被动语态也不用于进行时。所以要删除been。

第十处:考查形容词。句意:作为一种可口的食物月饼也出现在西方世界了。句中应该使用形容词tasty充当定语修饰名词food,所以要把taste改为tasty。

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【题目】 Punks, Ravers, Mods and Teddy Boys are the names of British youth subcultures (亚文 ) from the last 70 years.

Youth Club, a UK not-for-profit organization, released a book earlier this year celebrating many different subcultures from throughout Britain’s recent history.

“A catalyst (催化剂) for creativity on the worldwide stage, British youth culture movements from the Teddy Boys of the 1950s to the Grime Scene of the 2000s continue to play a pioneering role in music, fashion and creativity across the globe”, it wrote on its website.

These subcultures were traditionally a way for young people to show their personalities to others. Walking around London in the 1970s would have meant seeing dozens of young “punks” ——people dressed in ripped denim (破洞), leather jackets, body piercings (穿孔) and with brightly-dyed hair on the streets. And in the 90s, “ravers” were young people who threw all-night parties in abandoned buildings or car parks.

So, what was the reason behind these subcultures?

“On both sides of the Atlantic, more and more young disappointed teenagers were looking for an escape from the boredom and constraints (约束) of society,” wrote Ian Youngs, BBC entertainment reporter. “Unemployment, racial tensions and social upheaval (剧变) added fuel to their fires.”

“Fashion and music are much cheaper and faster today.” said Ruth Adams, a culture lecturer at King’s College London, “but it’s all a bit more blurry (模糊不清的).” She believes it’s harder to figure out someone’s personality or music tastes nowadays just by looking at them.

Despite this, Adams believes that today’s young people are still finding their own way to express themselves, but in a more modern way.

1According to the text, British youth subcultures ________.

A.were a way for youth to express their identities

B.were started by Youth Club to promote creativity

C.could be traced back to the 1970s

D.had a greater effect on fashion than music

2What contributed to the popularity of youth subcultures?

A.Youth club of culture movements.

B.Young people’s longing for fame and wealth.

C.Young people’s desire for freedom and fun.

D.The easy access to fashion and music.

3Which of the following would Ruth Adams probably agree with?

A.It costs more money to stick to fashion and music.

B.Young people today can’t express themselves easily.

C.Young people today are less interested in music and fashion.

D.It’s harder to recognize the personalities of young people today.

4What’s the author’s attitude towards subcultures?

A.Negative.B.Objective.C.Doubtful.D.Supportive.

【题目】 “The price of books for our students is just getting higher and higher andcombined with the rising cost of tuitionit’s killing these students”said Peter Jasona college professor. “Rememberstudents are one of the poorest groups of people in America. Almost half of them have at least one part-time job. In factone of my students has three jobs. And she still manages to have high scores and go to school full-time. ”

Textbook prices are traditionally high. Adding to that problem, many college teachers change textbooks year after year; they either upgrade to a new edition or switch to an entirely different textbook. This further hurts students because if an instructor no longer uses a particular textbookthat book has no resale value.

Dr. Jason decided to make reading a little easier and a lot cheaper for his students by writing his own book on public speaking. “Many books have an increased price because of CD-ROMslots of color photographs and pictures. I talked to my studentsand many of themlike meprefer to keep things simple! Soa few years agoI wrote my own textbook. Compared to most other public speaking booksmine is half the number of pagesand one-third the price. That is$30 instead of $90. When I wrote a second edition last yearstudents only had to buy the 35 new pages, For only $7. 00they had almost a new book. Now my loose-leaf textbook enjoys great popularity among the students. Maybe in the future more writers and publishers will try it. ”

1What did Dr. Jason say about students at college?

A.They are short of money.

B.They need better textbooks.

C.They should do part-time jobs.

D.They are trying to get high scores.

2What did Dr. Jason decide to do to help the students?

A.To choose cheaper textbooks.

B.To write a textbook himself.

C.To speak to his students.

D.To use old textbooks.

3How much does a public speaking textbook usually cost?

A.About 7 dollars.B.About 30 dollars.

C.About 37 dollars.D.About 90 dollars.

4Which of the following can be inferred from the passage?

A.Dr. Jason’s textbook has CD-ROMs and nice pictures.

B.More writers and publishers will write simpler textbooks.

C.Dr. Jason teaches public speaking at a college.

D.Dr. Jason’s textbook is not well received.

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