Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

I can’t forgot one of the most coldest nights I experienced. It was six in evening and cold winds were blowing strongly outside. The water from the tap were icy cold, and made my fingers numb. We all decided to staying inside the house. My mother made hot tomatoes soup for us. It was great to have the hot soup, as it made me feel warmly. Around nine at night, it starts snowing heavily. Look outside the window, I saw snow falling on everything. My mother held me tightly in my arms and I soon fell asleep.

Answer 1

【答案】1.forgot→forget

2.去掉most

3.evening前添加the

4.were→was

5.staying→stay

6.tomatoes→tomato

7.warmly→warm

8.starts→started

9.Look→Looking

10.my→her

【解析】

这是一篇记叙文。文章记叙了作者经历过的最寒冷的一个夜晚。

1.考查动词。can为情态动词，后跟动词原形，故forgot改为forget。

2.考查最高级。coldest为形容词最高级，前面不再需要添加most。故去掉most。

3.考查冠词。根据短语in the evening表示“在晚上”。故evening前添加the。

4.考查主谓一致。本句主语为The water，water为不可数名词，故谓语动词应用单数。故were改为was。

5.考查动词。根据短语decide to do sth.表示“决定做某事”，后跟不定式。故staying改为stay。

6.考查名词的数。短语tomato soup表示“番茄汤”，用单数名词，故tomatoes改为tomato。

7.考查形容词。feel为系动词，后跟形容词作表语，故warmly改为warm。

8.考查动词时态。结合全文可知事情发生在过去应用一般过去式，故starts改为started。

9.考查非谓语动词。分析句子结构可知，look在句中作非谓语动词，与逻辑主语I构成主动关系，故用现在分词。故Look改为Looking。

10.考查代词。句意：妈妈把我紧紧地抱在她怀里，我很快就睡着了。此处表示妈妈的怀里，应用形容词性物主代词her。故my改为her。