题目内容
【题目】假设你的名字叫李华,正在伦敦某中学做交换生。校友Chris正筹划一场关于中国文化的演出活动,但他在演出内容方面遇到了瓶颈,因此来信向你求助。请你给他写封回信,内容包括:
1. 说明写信目的;
2. 提出建议;
3. 表示期待。
注意:1. 词数100左右,开头语和结尾语已为你写好;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
Dear Chris,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Chris,
I'm sorry to hear that you have had trouble with programme contents of the Chinese culture show. Don't worry. I'm very pleased to give you some advice.
Chinese culture is becoming more and more popular around the world. So this is a good opportunity for the students in our school to experience it. As for the content, I recommend Chinese traditional culture like Beijing Opera and Chinese Shadow Show. If necessary, I'd also like to help you with the preparations because I know several Chinese exchange students here who are fond of Chinese traditional culture. I believe their participation will make the culture show more attractive.
I hope my advice can be helpful and I' m looking forward to the Chinese culture show.
Yours sincerely
Li Hua,
【解析】
这是一篇应用文,要求写一封信。
第一步:审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一,假设你的名字叫李华,正在伦敦某中学做交换生。校友Chris正筹划一场关于中国文化的演出活动,但他在演出内容方面遇到了瓶颈,因此来信向你求助。请你给他写封回信,内容包括:
1. 说明写信目的
2. 提出建议
3. 表示期待
第二,人称为第一人称。第三,时态为一般现在时和一般将来时。
第二步:布局段落,确定主要段落,次要段落,段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段,说明写信目的。第二段,提出建议。第三段,表示期待。
第三步:确定关键词汇和短语: opportunity ,recommend ,have trouble with,opportunity,help sb with, be fond of.
第四步:确定较为高级的句子: because引导的原因状语从句和who引导的定语从何If necessary, I'd also like to help you with the preparations because I know several Chinese exchange students here who are fond of Chinese traditional culture. 省略that的宾语从句I believe their participation will make the culture show more attractive.
第五步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接:besides,however,in conclusion.
第六步:注意书写,保持卷面整洁,避免划线,乱擦。